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I stand here in a lobby,the elevator is stuck on a floor,mom told me to pick up my frumpy outcast sister. The elevator blinks,4,4,4,4,4. The janitor watches me,I stare right back at him through my sunglasses,his eyes are like thos ugly dolls girls and creepy old ladies collect. I roll my eyes and wait. 4,4,4,4,4,4,4,4,4,4. I look at him in the corner of my eye. He opens his mouth and a siren's blare comes out...Wait..no...The sirens cut off his words. Jackets and men im too indrogenous to be flood around me. They scream for the crowbar. Where is the crowbar? The crowbar. My weak stomach churns. WAIT! 3,3,2,2,1,1, soft click and a sing song chime of the doors opening...Colours I didnt know the names to coated the elevator walls. My sister,my sister,where is- I see her messy bun sticking out of the bloody mess...No...She...I look at the people remaining inside...I scream with rage. "Where is the crowbar!? For I have seen hell!"

Vendetta Tonshi
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  • User Comments: [2]
    JADE OMG~ YOU SHOULD WRITE A BOOK! THAT WAS AWESOME! 3nodding 3nodding 3nodding

    comment Aenomlette · Community Member · Sun Oct 24, 2010 @ 11:09pm
    Suspensful biggrin I like it~

    comment Gunslinger Akune · Community Member · Sun Nov 07, 2010 @ 08:03pm
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