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I loved it so much cause it hurt to read it. But it was kinda funny too. I want people to read this.
It was like any other day of romance. Two young couple stood by the street light
waiting for the bus to arrive. It was very cold outside, even with the thickest coat
they can buy it still made them shiver. It was not windy though?the sky was dark grey with white speckled floating down.
Few minutes passed by and it was still quiet. There weren't any shops open at this late hour, nor any customers passing by.
Suddenly the girl spoke quietly.
"I think the dinner went pretty nicely," she said.
"I think the meat could have been less salty thought..." the boy spoke in silence. They laughed silently for few seconds and the conversation stopped. In a moment the boy started to mumble something. The girl looked at him slowly as he started chewing on his finger.
"How many times have I told you not to bite your finger?" she quickly pulled the hand away from his mouth.
"..I-I'm sorry I didn't realize I was." He quickly put his hands back in his pocket.
The girl gulped and closed her eyes. "If the therapist is not helpful, then tell me," she spoke with her eyes still closed.
The boy looked at her in fear.
"Please don't send me there again!! he replied nervously.
"I never said I would," she slowly looked at him.
"But you will because I yelled at Mrs. Abram's baby!" he started to tangle his coat with his thin and bony fingers.
"No I-"
"And because the baby started to cry and Mrs. Abrams left the house without eating your dinner."
"Can you-"
"And you are mad at me because the dinner was ruined. You are mad."
"No I'm-"
"You hate me, you want to send me there again, you are mad at me, you hate me!" He started to chew his finger again.
Without a word the girl turned her head away from it and deeply sighed.
"You don't love me anymore," the boy quietly mumbled.
"I don't love you anymore?" she answered.
"You never loved me, you hated me," he quietly mumbled again.
"After all I have done for you, you think I hate you?!" she almost yelled.
"..." He continued to chew his finger.
There was a long pause in the conversation.
"You think you are in pain?" she asked in a painful voice.
"Do you think nobody loves you? What about me then, then? If I do not love you, then I guess, I guess you don't love me either, don't you? Don't you?!" she yelled.
The boy ignored her furious words. He now started to bite his fingers.
"Do you have any idea how much hard time I have...just to...SAVE YOUR BUTT FROM EMBARASSMENT?! And you think you are lonely and unloved?!"
"You hate me," he answered.
"If you keep on doing this, I'm breaking up with you." She turned around and folded her arms.
"Break. Up?" He stopped biting his hand and slowly walked toward the girl.
"It's not worth for me to waste my effort on some guy who can't even show some gratitude," she said.
"But...I ...I need you." He walked closer.
"What for? You don't love me."
"I love you."
"Oh now you say you love me," she still refused to look at his face.
"Why? Why are you doing this? ...I love you, I said. Don't you love me back?" he said.
"If you keep ignoring me then I can't," she grumbled.
"Why are you so sad?" he asked.
"I'm not sad?"
"But you get irritated so easily."
"..."
"It's me isn't it?"
"No."
"IT'S ME ISN'T IT?"
"..."
"YOU LIE! YOU LIE! IT'S ME AND YOU LIE!"
"DON'T CALL ME A LIAR!"
"YOU LIE!"
"IT'S NOT YOU!"
"YOU LIED TO ME?"
"OK FINE IT'S YOU OKAY?!"
"..." He gasped.
"Why is it such a surprise? You are the problem. You embarrass me in the public, I keep saving your butt but YOU NEVER THANKED ME, I have done countless things for you and THIS IS WHAT I GET?! Last time I tried tp postpone the date because my mother was suffering from cancer, but I eventually did not because you kept crying, and because I thought you were gonna die, so I RISKED myself to leave my mom alone in the hospital! That day my mother died! It's because of that STUPID DATE, and after the date YOU DIDN'T EVEN thank me for it! You...You weren't even there when I had the break down!" she gasped for air.
"..." he was silent.
"You remember my best friend? She hung herself 2 weeks ago, do YOU KNOW WHY?! It's because I stopped giving her attention but all to you because you are just RETARDED, and at one point I had to yell at her in order to protect you, but that made her hang herself, because she was so lonely and hurt, and that night when I needed you to hold me, you weren't there for me! YOU WERENT THERE FOR ME!" she yelled as few drops of tears trickled down her cheek.
"I risked my time, my mother, and my best friend to help you, AND THIS IS WHAT I GET?!" she covered her face with her hand and slowly fell on her knees. She started to cry as she dug her body into the snow.
"I love you."
"GET AWAY FROM ME, I HATE YOU!" she yelled. The boy backed away from her.
"I-"
"My mother and my best friend was the only thing I had," she said. "Till you came in and ruined my life," she said as she sobbed uncontrollably.
"I lost two precious things in my life wasting my effort on you," she said. "I have nothing left." She wrapped herself with her arms and shook slowly. ?I want to die," she finally said.
"That's a crime," he replied.
"What's a crime?" She looked back at him with her damaged and burnt eyes.
"Killing... Is a crime. If you kill yourself that's a crime. You..you are gonna?" he replied
"I'm gonna what?" she asked in confusion.
"I don't want you to die as a criminal," He said silently, "It's..it's bad to kill but it's bad to die..if you kill yourself..you..will be in an eternal jail. If you just die...then. Then you don't," he turned back.
"What are you saying?" she asked.
"I can kill you for you," he answered in a shaky voice. The girl's eyes suddenly opened widely and she gasped a little.
"I will take your crime for you," he spoke quietly and reached into his pocket.
"I want you to rest in peace my love," he said as he slowly took out a gun and aimed at her forehead. The girl stayed still from her shock and watched the gun c**k.
"Darling..." she spoke in an exhausted and dead voice.
"I love you," The girl fell on the floor as the gun exploded. Blood slowly gushed out from her head, reddening the white snow surrounding her dead body. The girl's soft and peaceful face lied on the pink snow, while the snowing kept falling quietly and slowly.
Her corpse did not look like a corpse. It rather looked like a sleeping beauty covered in white blanket in silence.
"She will share her dreams with me when she wakes up and we'll have a cup of tea and a toast with strawberry jam on it." He slowly walked away from the dead girl and the silence continued.
Written by: EmptyShadow.deviantart.com
 SikFox · Sun Jun 04, 2006 @ 06:55pm · 0 Comments |
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