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-Confucius had his Analects and I have my journal-
Poems
The way we danced
I could have danced forever
The way you looked into my eyes
I thought this was a dream of lovers forever
But when I looked back at the moment
It could not have been more real
The way that we both felt
I could feel the aura of love
The way we danced
I felt like I was floating along clouds
The way you held me
I haven't felt such warmth before
The way you held onto me
There were so many unsaid words by your touch
The way you loved me
I wouldn't ever stop dancing..

Your tears
Don't cry
I want to wipe them all away
With a stroke of my hand
Have your troubles fade away
Like a sunset before night
I would love to see the sunset
And try to bring enough light to your darkness
Because...
I can't sit back and watch you cry

The way you say I love you
Makes me want to hold onto you
Kiss you
It makes me want to close my eyes and take in those beautiful words..
The way you say I love you
Makes my heart beat twice as fast
And smile
They way you say I love you
Makes me blush the hardest I ever could
The way you love me
Makes me love you all the more..

My dear friend
I'll see this, us, to the end
So many reasons why we shouldn't be
But one reason why we are
That reason
Keeps a smile on my face
Makes me happy that we found each other
Makes me want to dance around and sing your name..
Makes me want to write you a million love letters
And give you one thousand kisses..
This one reason, keeps me going..






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XxShAnxX
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commentCommented on: Thu Nov 16, 2006 @ 11:11pm
that is niice.. its so true and all heart


commentCommented on: Fri Nov 17, 2006 @ 09:45pm
It wasn't quite finished. I just needed to save it so I could finish. It is done now. 3nodding



Idiosyncratic Quirk
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Saygen40
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commentCommented on: Wed Nov 22, 2006 @ 04:25am
Wow! That was so deep! Very beautiful poem and I take it it is towards your boyfriend. SOOOOO cute!!!! You must have one hell of a guy!


commentCommented on: Wed Nov 22, 2006 @ 06:39am
its cool... sorry im being negative today. emo



karusono
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XxShAnxX
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commentCommented on: Wed Nov 22, 2006 @ 10:40am
it beautiful


commentCommented on: Thu Nov 23, 2006 @ 01:50pm
I don't usually comment on anyone's journals, but since you asked so nicely, here it is. ^_^;

By the way, this is a cute poem... makes me envy you a little, lol. I'm a story-writer but I have no skillz for poetry. sweatdrop So, yeah... that's it. XD



xXChibi ZoriXx
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Ranman_ no_Otome
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commentCommented on: Thu Nov 23, 2006 @ 04:09pm
What beautiful poem heart


commentCommented on: Mon Dec 04, 2006 @ 11:59pm
It's so nice...makes me think of you-know-who... sad



baronesswinchester
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dragndude9
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commentCommented on: Sun Dec 24, 2006 @ 04:57am
wow... amazing. I had no idea you wrote poetry. And such beautiful poetry at that.


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