well its been a while since i have wrote in this thing. how about a short story.
She looked out the frosty window. The ice around the frame. as She stared out the window her body became cold and her face turned to ice. She felt as if she was the window now. A knock at the door intereppted her as she hastly turned away and the heat rushed back to her body. "Who would that be at this time," she said under her breath. She got up with sigh in slipping from her lips and walked to the door. She opened it only slightly as the door creeked open. "Yes," she said catiously."Help,help,"said a low and hurt voice. "who are you,"She said with fear building up in her. "please i have been stabbed uhh....," he said about to faint. She backed away from the door quickly before his body flung the door open and slammed to the ground. "AHHHHHH!" She screamed with fear. Lying there in her doorway,barely breathing was this young man about her age with a wooden stake deep in his back.
Please give comments on how this short story has started out!
-__Necromnacer__- · Thu Dec 14, 2006 @ 05:56am · 1 Comments |