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hey Gains.im writing a new story,called Maggie:The spirit of the Great Black Dragon
Hope you Enjoy!
Once there was a little girl named Maggie.Maggie loved to draw,sing,and play with her stuffed animals.Her most prized stuffed animal was a brown and white bunny,that she had gotten when she was Four years old.The bunnies name was Mr.Fuzzles.Oh how she loved to play with that bunnie.She would play with that bunnie all day,and never get tired of playing with him.She played with Mr.Fuzzles,because she had no other friends.Not even her own Father would play with her,because he said he was to busy.Yeah...to busy going out to bars and hanging out with other women who poor little Maggie didn't even know,and she didn't like them either.They would always say "aren't you a little OLD to be playing with junk like this??" or "what a horrible girl!she plays with stuffed animals still??"Poor little Maggie who was only eight,wanted to cry because of that.She said there was nothing wrong with playing with the ones you love,and she was right.She had only gotten him when she was four after all.Wasn't that long ago.Maggie had long black hair that went down to her waist,and bright red eyes.People would always say behind her back "whats wrong with that girl..is she sick?" or "EEK!!GET THAT THING AWAY FROM ME!" and laugh horridly.Those people never lived to see daylight again,because when someone made her angry,she would unleash a great evil from down inside her lonely heart.A spirit in the form of the great Black Dragon.It would kill the people..in one fair swipe.Then leave them there to die alone,because of what they said to poor little Maggie.She was so frightened of her special evil,that she began obeying what it would tell her to do.It told her in her mind.."You know im the only friend youv'e got..me and that bunnie of yours....obey what i tell you to do...join me..and i promise..you shall have all the friends you desire" and she did.Poor poor Maggie.One night when her dad came hom from the bar,drunk and looking like heck,he blamed Maggie for the house looking so dirty and messed up.He began chasing her through the house,with a hatchet that he had gotten from the tool shed,which had all his building tools.First he chased her down to her bedroom.Maggie screamed as she locked the door,to keep him out.Her dad chopped through the door,and yelled.."Where are you going????I just wanna play!!".Poor Maggie screamed.."No daddy!!!!NEVER!!"..and pushed him down the stairs of the house to try and get away.She ran down the stairs past him,and tripped.Maggies dad grabbed her ankle,and held her down untill she could no longer move.He began moving his hand to her neck.He picked her up off the floor by her neck,and getting ready to slice her in half with the hatchet,she started to glow.An evil aura swept over the entire house,and swirled around Maggie.I voice came out that was not maggies."Now you will no longer be able to hurt me.Me,anybody,or yourself!!!!"Maggies eyes were glowing bright red with anger,fury,and frustration."HYA!"Maggies arms shot out in front of her dad.Her dad flew across the room,and broke down the door because he flew so far,and went so fast and hard.Maggie floated by him,with a sword in her hand.A black sword,with a glowing red jem in the handle bar.Lifting the sword up with both hands,getting ready to strike,maggie yelled these words."You never loved me..and you never will when im done with you!!!i always hated you...you would bring home people i didnt know!!!!!!!!!!!ill never forgive you....".As Maggie screamed those words,she plunged the sword down into her fathers caringless,and black heart.Her dad screamed in pain,and said "ill get you..ill haunt you in your dreams..i will be there...watching your every move."Then he layed there,and died.Maggies eyes grew redder and angrier by the second.she screamed.."nooooo!!!!!!"and two verry dragon like black wings,had sprouted out of Maggies back.Then a voice in her head said.."Hehe..you are becoming more like me by the second!!"She was startled,and started to run.She didnt know where,but she ran.She grabbed the only thing that mattered,Mr.Fuzzles.
Later she got too tired to run anymore,so she collapsed on the ground,holding Mr.Fuzzles as tightly as she could.Three days later,she woke up in a large house."W-where are we Mr.Fuzzles?"
To Be Continued.
okay.scince i like writing this story so much,im gonna go ahead and writ the second part.im not sure how many parts there are gonna be,but im pretty much just making this all up as i go along.so...yeah.Hope you enjoy the second part!
"Your in my house made of metal"A boy with black hair that went down over one of his eyes,and part vampire said."I made this house by myslef."Maggie sat and stared at the boy,who she seemed to like.This boys name,was Tom.Tom had a special and eunique power,in which he could bend metal,earth,or any substance of earth he wanted.He could make metal sculptures,trophies,he could fling cars at evil,and all that junk.Tom,was nine years old."Pleasure to meet you..um..i didnt catch your name..awesome wings!"Said Tom."Maggie.And thanx..i guess...they kinda scare me though..and Mr.Fuzzles"She held up her brown and white bunnie."I have a bunnie kinda like that!"Tom held up a black and white bunnie,who's name was youchan."I dont know where i came up with that name though...i guess i was really bored..hehe"Tom set his bunnie aside."Why were you laying on the ground?you looked really tired and scared..what happened??"Tom looked worried for Maggie.Who could blame him??"My daddy...he..i dont really wanna talk about it"Maggie looked down at Mr.Fuzzles,and she thought she saw him wink at her."Huh??"Said Maggie."What is it?"Said Tom."N-nothing.an allusion."After getting to know Tom a llittle better,and eating something to replenish her strength,she fell asleep.She had a dream.An auful dream,about the Black Dragon spirit welled up inside her.She dreamed that if she kept obeying him,and doing what he told her to do,she would have no friends,and she would become the Great Black Dragon.A voice spoke to her.."Do not listen to your dreams..they are only trying to make you have nothing in this world...and if you keep obeying me..you will not become me...the Dragon wings were just a coincidence..keep obeying me.."Maggie tried as hard as she could to try and get the voice out of her head with singing,but it didnt work.Maggie said thank-you to Tom and youchan,and decided to go on a journey,to find out how to stop her dream from coming true."I will see you again...wont i?"i think Tom was starting to like Maggie."Of course.I got the wings...so i can come visit sometime."She waved good-bye,and flew away with Mr.Fuzzles held tightly in her arms."You know..i think he was starting to like you Maggie."someone was speaking to her,but she didnt know who.It wasnt the Great Black dragon.She would recognize his voice anywhere."Who is there??"She lookes down and saw Mr.Fuzzles,wink at her again."WAAA!!!!"Maggie screamed as Mr.Fuzzles flew out of her arms."whydya let me go??CATCH MEE!!!!"Maggie zoomed down as fast as she could to retrieve the bunnie that she loved so much.She caught him,but just in time."Mr.Fuzzles!!!you talk!!!"Maggie was delighted to hear this,because now she knew she would have an even better time playing with him."My...name...isnt...Mr.Fuzzles..im..a...girl..my name is Yukahashi."Maggie blinked twice before saying.."really??s-sorry i...didnt know that." sweatdrop Maggie zoomed back up into the air,and brought Yukahashi with."What are you trying to do anyway Maggie?"Yukahashi said with great interest."Im seeking out for the one thing that might help me get rid of the Great Black dragon inside of me.I dont know what yet..so thats why i had to leave Tom and find it out."Yuka sat silent for a while.
"you know..that black and white bunie that Tom had...was kinda..cute.."Maggie laughed while Yuka was blushing,and flew farther away,untill she came to a temple in the shape of a dragon.The Great Black Dragons voice came in her head again.
"Go....go to that temple..and i will show you how to get rid of me....for good."And because Maggie was only eight,and had to obey everything that the spirit told her to,she went.she was scared,but she did it anyway.Yuka said to herself.."I dont like this....not one bit."Once Maggie set foot at the door of the temple,a voice in her head said..."Say the password..i know you know it..."Maggie closed her eyes and said something sounding like this.
"Traj'ien.........Ruyinga............HAL'IENDA!!"
The door flung open...to reveal a large circle,and a dradon statue in the front.There were large torches lit with crackling blue fire,ans dragons held the torches with their tails.Maggie walked slowly inside,holding Yuka close to her,and squeezing her as tightly as she could."eh....ah...choking..MAGGIE!!"Maggie loosened her grip"Sorry Yuka...im a little frightened...thats all..."A voice in Maggies head spoke once more."Go and stand on that platform...the one in front of the dragon statue...and say the magic spell...you might have forgotten it by now...but you will know as soon as you step on the platform."Maggie hesitated."Go."She went and stood on the bright blue glowing platform...and said the spell.
"Tuuken omen taitelliean"
The platform shot out a beam of light,and Mmaggie screamed because she didnt know what was going on.Maggie felt frightened.Then cane another scream..one of pain.The Great Black Dragons spirit lifted out of Maggie...and into the statue.As it was lifting,an evil laugh spoke.Maggie was hot,and she felt exhausted.Maggie lookes up at the statue.Its eyes......were glowing.
To be continued.
ok this is the third part in Maggies adventurous life!hope ya enjoy...i seem to say that a lot....dont i???
Maggie looked up and said.."What have i done...yuka?"The bunnie lay still...she noticed something in the bunnies neck..a..stone?Maggie wanted to get up and help yuka..but she was to drained of her power to barely even move.Maggies long hair swept over her face..and in her head she saw an image of the only person who ever loved her,even though she was different.He mother.Oh Maggies mother was beautiful.Maggies mother looked just like an angel to Maggie..with her bright Blue eyes,and flowing brown hair..Maggies mother said these words to her.."Maggie..my darling..even though your tired and exhausted..you have to help your friend..here.."
When Maggies hair was out of her face,she looked down in her hands and she saw a bright pink glowing liquid.There was a note on the bottle..it said.
Maggie.....
I love you so much,I can not stand to see you die in the hands of this
evil spirit.Drink this,and it will replenish your strength more than youll
ever know.I love you,and always will.
heart ~Mommy~ heart
Maggies hart had been filled with joy,knowing that she could do it.Maggie poped open the bottle,and drank every last drop of the gooey substance.Then she folded up the note and put it in her jean pockets.Maggie felt so much more..alive.She stood up and ran over to her friend,and pulled out the stone of the bunnies kneck.
It seemed to glow brighter and brighter,the tighter she held onto it.a lovely voice spoke in her head,"Go my darling.Put the jewel into the forehead of the Great Black Dragon,and free all who it has taken prisoner/killed."Maggie ran as fast as she could to the statue of the Dragon,but she tripped!"AHAHA!!THE METAMORPHASIS IS COMPLETE!!!I RETURN!!!SCYTHE!!!THE GREAT BLACK DRAGON!!!!!!!"Maggie heard a big rumbling noise..it came closer,and closer.rrrrrrrrrrrrBAM!!!!A gigantic metal sphere came crashing down into the temple."Tom!!!!!Youchan!!!!!"Maggie screamed...im happy.."Maggie's voice got cut off by the dragons evil words."Foolish little girl...foolish boy...how could you ever hope to defeat..me???"Tom rolled his eyes."Youchan,Yuka,show him.Youchan and Yuka suddenly transformed into these titanic monster warrior rabbits.Yuka was blushing,and YOuchan rolled his eyes and blushed too."Ha!!!you think that mere bunnies can defeat me???"Tom rolled is eyes once more,and charged with the big spear made of metal."YAA!!!!!!"CRUMBLE....CRASH.....a temple torch had fallen on top of Maggie,and began winding itself around her."Tom...eh..help Tom!"
"Im coming Maggie!!!!"Maggie screamed as the Great Black Dragon swooped her up,in one of its big hands.And it flew away,into the great big black sky.
"Tom!!!!!Tom!!!Tooooooomm!!!!"Maggie cried as she called for tom.
"Im coming Maggie!!!!!Im coming!!!
To be continued...O.O
PART FOUR OF MAGGIES ADVENTURE!!!!
"Youchan!!!Come on we have to go help Maggie!!!!"YOuchan came running up to Tom,and out sprouted two sets of balck wings.Tom jumped on the back of Youchan,and the flew up as fast as they could.Spear in hand,and the jewel in the other(Maggie had dropped it when Scythe grabbed her),Tom and Youchan burst up with incredible strength and speed."HAHAH...YOU THINK YOU AND THAT BUNNIE WILL EVER GET CLOSE TO ME??"Scythe had swiped at them,but they dodged it with magnificent speed."Dont have to ugly!!!!Maggie!!!catch!!"Tom had gotten close enough to throw the jewel to Maggie...but had gottes swiped away by Scythe."Ahhh!!!!!!!"Tom had fallen off the back of Youchan,and plunged down into the temple floor,while Youchan fell unconciouse."Tom!!!!Youchan!!!...scythe...."
Maggie grew so angry,that she began to glow even brighter than before.Her eyes lit up with blinding light,and a burst of energy shot out from Maggie and the jewel she held.Scythe had not been able to hold Maggie any longer,because she was so good and pure.Her dragon wings had then become pure white silky angel wings.To her they were a symbol of her mother.And her love for Tom."You have been very bad Scythe..and for that you shall regret it."Inside Maggies hand,a bright ball of energy,began to build up bigger and bigger.Maggie was thinking of her mother,and her mother had given her that strength."Maggie glanced up at Scythe,and pushed her hands out in front of her strongly,and the energy created thousands of tiny strands of bright beams,which swept over Scythe in a matter of moments.Scythe screamed a series of horrible mind swelling screams,and then he desinegrate into dust,and the wind blew him away.Maggie and Tom just stared at the dust,and then looked back at eachother.Before saying another word,Tom pulled Maggie toward him,and kissed her full on the mouth.Maggie,blushing,nearly fainted...and then,they walked away happy together.
THE END.
GAIANS I HOPE YOU LIKE MY STORY!!!REMENBER.LIGHT CAN ALWAYS BE FOUND IN THE DARKEST OF PLACES. wink
 XxMoonlight_WolveXx · Fri Mar 30, 2007 @ 07:01am · 14 Comments |
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