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My fire My heart's desires They wish for you They plead for you Day in And day out Tears of joy to see you But tears of pain that I'm not with you I want to say, hold on dreams Hold on heart To what you have now To what you really and will always want But the tears discourage me How I long for you so. But as much as I yearn for the one day That my heart and dreams are complete I wait another day for you to see me for who I am And wonder and wonder and wonder I can't stand this wondering But my eyes are on the prize Those eyes You hypnotist How I adore you How I would adore your arms wrapped around me Cradeling me, sheltering me from everything With all my heart I do and always will You don't know how much I do My dearest How I.. Love you. You set my heart aflame but you leave me to burn

Posted by: Idiosyncratic Quirk Thu Apr 26, 2007 @ 04:48am

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Commented on: Thu Apr 26, 2007 @ 05:08am


	Oh wowness. @_@

Commented on: Thu Apr 26, 2007 @ 05:09am


	That is a beautiful poem biggrin You are a talented writer.

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Commented on: Thu Apr 26, 2007 @ 06:16am


	...wow, that was so good. Beautifully done! biggrin You rhymed things perfectly and nice use of pause to create a large impact on the words!

Commented on: Thu Apr 26, 2007 @ 11:06am


	thats good.. talent

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Commented on: Thu Apr 26, 2007 @ 01:26pm


	O.O ZoMyGaWd!1! thats jst.... awesome!

Commented on: Thu Apr 26, 2007 @ 04:35pm


	nice

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Tien Natsume
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Commented on: Thu Apr 26, 2007 @ 05:01pm


	I wouldn't say that was talent, because poetry isn't about your talent its about the amount of heart and Passion you put into you words. The meaning and the delivery, the state of mind and the all together background of your true feelings. Gn I really Like that about you, your really smart yet you have this silly side but it wouldn't be you with out both sides, I suppose I wouldn't want you any other way, it'll suck to take away from your perfect personality. I only have one question? Was this meant to be a poem or is this something you want someone to know just in the words that best suits you. You really have some skill Gn, and...your words are very calmimg to me.

Commented on: Thu Apr 26, 2007 @ 06:03pm


	I'm not exactly a fan of poetry, but this is nice, I like it. Very simple and pretty. <3

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Commented on: Thu Apr 26, 2007 @ 08:50pm


	wow i knew you loved me but i didnt know you loved me that much! lol just kidding around.

Commented on: Thu Apr 26, 2007 @ 09:34pm


	:O heart i like this one <3

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Pup Crazed Kiya
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Commented on: Thu Apr 26, 2007 @ 11:27pm


	that was really good! O_O I loved it! Keep writting poems like that! ^^

Commented on: Thu Apr 26, 2007 @ 11:45pm


	I know, I can relate.

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Commented on: Thu Apr 26, 2007 @ 11:59pm


	Wow, such an emotional poem. I like it. 3nodding The way how you make it sound so good. Keep it up, you should write more poems.

Commented on: Fri Apr 27, 2007 @ 02:10am


	meh not bad

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Commented on: Fri Apr 27, 2007 @ 02:14am


	You have skill 3nodding

Commented on: Fri Apr 27, 2007 @ 02:20am


	It's like... stutterstutterstutter Whao. Beautiful. <33

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Commented on: Fri Apr 27, 2007 @ 03:11am


	I Dig it

Commented on: Fri Apr 27, 2007 @ 06:47am


	This journal rules. I like it. xd

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Commented on: Sat Apr 28, 2007 @ 02:26am


	I've nothing to say... eek

Commented on: Sat Apr 28, 2007 @ 02:25pm


	No, it's just.....Wow...

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Taimi
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Commented on: Tue May 08, 2007 @ 05:53am


	It's very very pretty my dear. ^^ heart Well done.

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