Mary-Suew-Tester

[ ] They are possessed by an Angel
[ ] They are an Angel
[ ] They are possessed by a Demon
[ ] They are a Demon
[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/fairy
[ ] They are physically strong
[ ] They have a rare hair/fur color
[ ] Their eyes are an unusual color
[ ] Their eyes change color
[ ] They have wings/tail/animal ears (at all times)
[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shape shift
[ ] They are immortal
[ ] (if a female) they have large boobs
[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular
[ ] They are very attractive to everyone of the opposite gender (Or to everyone of the gender they prefer)
[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers.
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[ ] They are a healer(Only count if there are no restrictions)
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family (if they don't excise the power this give them it doesn't count.)
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background (If they don't know it and don't use it, it still counts.)
[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents.
[ ] They ran away from home
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death
[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[ ] They never knew their parents
[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender( or opposite)
[ ] They have lots of friends(this only counts if there is no conflict among the many friends they have.)
[ ] they have no friends
[ ] They are emo/cutesy
[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[ ] They are currently in a relationship
[ ] They have lots if morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[ ] They have a mental disorder
[ ] They have an emotional disorder
[ ] They struggle to stay sane
[ ] They are a psycho (Stalking your friends count if it is constant. /someone asked/)
[ ] They have multiple personalities
[ ] They are very intelligent
[ ] They have hallucinations
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc(Can't have restrictions to count.)
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet (Unrealistic for the character. Ex: Harry Potter with a Dementor for a pet.)
[ ] They have a guardian spirit
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[ ] Some part of their body glows (Glowing markings count.)
[ ] They have a rare/unusual name
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[ ] They are connected with a certain element
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga (That's more copy write than Seuw, and should be avoided.)
[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something
[ ] They have a rare blood type (Unknown blood type counts)
[ ] They cry blood
[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live
[ ] They are very mysterious/dark
[ ] They are very lively/happy
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[ ] They are very patient
[ ] They are from a long Family line
[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[ ] They have amnesia
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[ ] The have a curse upon them
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[ ] They have insomnia

Overall points: 5

Point Reductions:
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[ ] They smoke
[ ] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight
[ ] They are addicted to drugs
[ ] They have a short temper
[ ] They enjoy bullying others
[ ] They do not care much about others
[ ] They are emotionless

Final score: 5

RESULT: Balanced Character
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5 Anti-Sue

Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit


6-15 Balanced Character

If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.


16-25 Borderline Mary-Sue

We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26+ Mary-Sue

If you score higher that 26 you've got problems that need to be solved. tone down you're character, this doesn't have to mean that you crap the character, they just need to be developed.

For the information of the people looking at this the following characters scored:
Ariana scored: 15
Kamiu scored: 16