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Dark Chronicles.
Is the story of chiaosy a paladin that became the wander of the abbys. i hope u can help me cuz i might public it in a book depends on how good u think it is.
Chapter 2 cont...


After the 2 day has passed. Every one was getting ready to leave the stronghold and chiaosy was picking her suffs. she didnt had neither the helmet or the bandana on her head and she has long ears like the one that elves has. At that time Ashrad enter the room and saw her.
Ashrad: are u ready?
Chiaosy: almost done!
She takes her bandana and cover her forhead and her ears.
Ashrad: u know that u have to ve careful not to wander without ure bandana.
Chiaosy: i know! you are the only one that have see them so far i cant risk to show them to anyone!.
Ashrad: lest go!
Both of them head outside and the rest were waiting.
Lucian: what took you so long?
Chiaosy: i was getting ready to leave....
Brack: chiaosy.... ure hair looks diferent today!
Chiaosy: Uh.
Ashrad: what are u talking about?
Brack: those red stripes on ure hair were there?
Ashrad: now that u mention that they werent there.
Chiaosy: what are u talking about?
D.faith: u can save that for later. right now we have to move.
Exerion: he is right!
Ashrad: hmmm Whats the hurry?
D.faith: is a long way and we must advance all we can before night fall.
Ashrad: very well then.
Both chiaosy and Ashrad get on their horses and d.faith gave the signal. All of the knights start moving. They traveled almost all the time until dark. after that the camp in the open and made a fire. Chiaosy got near Ashrad/
Chiaosy: what were you talking earlier about my hair?
Ashrad: i havent noticed until brack mentioned. you have little red stripes in your hair barely visibles. did u made them?
Chiaosy: no i havent. i barely wash my hair back at the stronghold.
Ashrad: if u didnt do it then how they got there?
Chiaosy: Dont ask me! but i dont think we should worry about it.
At that time exerion showed up and saw both of them talking.
Exerion: you should be resting dont you think?
Ashrad: well we are. dont worry about us.
Chiaosy: we'll be fine.
exerion: ...
After that a few days passed and they arrive at elencia and thew were shock when they saw the town compleatly destroyed.
Exerion: In the name of blatina! what the hell happend here?
D.faith: is compleatly destroyed!
Ashrad: this cant be!
All of them rushed to town and when they got there they saw all the plp slauthered.
Lucian: oh my goddess!
chiaosy: how could this happend?
They walked in the ruined city and got to the cathedral and they saw all of the soldiers dead and the apostol impaled in the front of the entrance along with the cardinals at his side.
Exerion: i wonder if they attack this place while we were fighting back there?
D.faith: we need to report this to the High priestress.
The 4 riders were standing there seen their town in ruins.
D.faith: will you come?
Exerion: there is no point in staying here and you know it.
Chiaosy: all the inocent People!!!!
Tears came trough her eyes and D.faith put his hand over her shoulders.
D.faith: come on!
Ashrad: i know there is nothing we can do right now so we might as well go to ETERIA.
Lucian: but!!!!
Brack: we could have prevented this!
Exerion: no! if they attacked this town and destroyed compleatly that only means that their forcer were greater that the one we fought back there.
D.faith: We must hurry and tell the priestress about this. im afraid that this might happend again to another town and we need to be prepare for this.
Ashrad: you're right we cant stay here any longer even if it pains us to leave this place like this. we must move on.
All of them start moving toward the City of eteria.
D.faith: we should stop and rest at Crislom.
Exerion: we can stay at duke's alford manor and rest there.
Ashrad: we have no option do we?
Exerion: you dont like the idea?
Chiaosy: The duke and ashrad had a little problem a while ago.
D.faith: it doesnt matter even if they do he must aid us.
Exerion: well you are with us and nobody decline to help you.
D.faith: what is that suppose to mean?
Exerion: you are the priestress personal guard and advisor! and she listen almost to everything that you said.
D.faith: ... the duke is an important allied and he offered to help the cathedral in every thing we need.
Ashrad: i dont doub that! he doesnt want to have the church againts him. and right now we dont have much option but to go there, do we?
Chiaosy: i guess not!
Lucian: crislom is filled with beautiful women so i dont mind going there.
Brack: is that the only thing in your mind?
Lucian: ... yea!
The head to crislom to seek shelter and rest. after 2 days they arrive in a small town....

To BE CONTINUE.....






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Capt Uchiha Saix
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commentCommented on: Thu Jan 17, 2008 @ 10:36pm
seriously i think you are very creative writer


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