View User's Journal

Welcome to Gaia! :: View User's Journal | Gaia Journals



Alone in fog(one big poem) Alone The fog of time overwhelms me. It brings in memories of people, and takes them away just as quick. In the end I am all alone. The memories of you are the sharpest, But they also hurt me the most. Sad and alone you have left me, to wallow in the image of your ghost. As time commences your image grows dimmer, And one day you’ll be gone forever. Even though this feeling is haunting, I do not mind. I feel that I’ll follow you shortly, into the fog of time.

Posted by: Sniperzero Sat May 17, 2008 @ 04:30am

DREAM AVI (not asking for donations just showing it) mrgreen

I'm a bit of a poet I would say, this is my TUMBLR. follow me and send requests.

User Comments: [11] [add]

fallenleaaves-
Community Member

Offline

Commented on: Fri Jul 11, 2008 @ 05:25am


	Woah.. that was amazing.

Commented on: Sat Jul 12, 2008 @ 08:36pm


	Wow very deep. I love how you use Fog as a symbol for depression and death, or well thats how I thought of it as! Its really great! Keep on writting!

SozoseiGaAru
Community Member

Offline

xXxtheLillianAlicexXx
Community Member

Offline

Commented on: Wed Aug 27, 2008 @ 01:04am


	you really good at pomes makes me want to get better with my writeing

Commented on: Sun Oct 12, 2008 @ 06:53am


	Oh my Choco Pocky~! This.Sure.Is.Awesome! Hell, can't even use the right words te describe zhis~

-xSoLitary_Mo0nx-
Community Member

Offline

DeletedbyJH
Community Member

Offline

Commented on: Sat Nov 01, 2008 @ 05:14am


	In every poem you write, it's about an certain individual. Who is it? neutral

Commented on: Mon Nov 10, 2008 @ 11:06pm


	you're a really good poet!! 3nodding

cccKrazy Ninja
Community Member

Offline

iseemoney
Community Member

Offline

Commented on: Wed Nov 12, 2008 @ 12:39am


	Your really good in poems.

Commented on: Tue Nov 18, 2008 @ 10:53pm


	I like your poem. ^_^ It's really good. You should check out my Journal. I think you'll like it. ^^

oOKagomeOo2845
Community Member

Offline

Sweet Lovely_kisser
Community Member

Offline

Commented on: Tue Jan 06, 2009 @ 03:13pm


	O_o emo but very good > < I like it I can relate

Commented on: Thu Mar 19, 2009 @ 12:22am


	crying is really good poem, sers.sdeep wink cry smile

Dark Keaks
Community Member

Offline

phatt kid
Community Member

Offline

Commented on: Fri Jun 05, 2009 @ 07:29am


	DUDE eek that is deep to be compleetly honest u kinda kreeped me out 4 a sec but all in all awesome

User Comments: [11] [add]

Welcome to Gaia! :: View User's Journal | Gaia Journals

More Information