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 Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2014 12:20 am
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Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2014 9:00 am
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Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2014 9:02 am
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CR Slap Elementis_Dragon CR Slap The Idea is just about a little brother and his three older brothers going thru each day of there lives. I do wish to be little brother though *raises hand* I ugh need this expanded on I'm lost. Like what needs to be expand, the time or wait for another person or I should expand or change my paragraph I made in complex. |
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Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2014 12:18 pm
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Elementis_Dragon CR Slap Elementis_Dragon CR Slap The Idea is just about a little brother and his three older brothers going thru each day of there lives. I do wish to be little brother though *raises hand* I ugh need this expanded on I'm lost. Like what needs to be expand, the time or wait for another person or I should expand or change my paragraph I made in complex. well the plot in general really.
I haven't thought of a longer plot um, hmm let me think for a bit |
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Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2014 12:39 pm
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Elementis_Dragon CR Slap Elementis_Dragon CR Slap The Idea is just about a little brother and his three older brothers going thru each day of there lives. I do wish to be little brother though *raises hand* I ugh need this expanded on I'm lost. Like what needs to be expand, the time or wait for another person or I should expand or change my paragraph I made in complex. well the plot in general really.
I thought of a more explain type of plot. It's not that big though. The three brothers lost there parents in a car crash, they were with them if course but only they survive. Now of days they have to take care of many problems since they are gone, money,food and shelter managements. |
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Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2014 1:08 pm
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CR Slap Elementis_Dragon CR Slap Elementis_Dragon CR Slap The Idea is just about a little brother and his three older brothers going thru each day of there lives. I do wish to be little brother though *raises hand* I ugh need this expanded on I'm lost. Like what needs to be expand, the time or wait for another person or I should expand or change my paragraph I made in complex. well the plot in general really. I thought of a more explain type of plot. It's not that big though. The three brothers lost there parents in a car crash, they were with them if course but only they survive. Now of days they have to take care of many problems since they are gone, money,food and shelter managements. |
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Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2014 1:14 pm
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Elementis_Dragon CR Slap Elementis_Dragon CR Slap Elementis_Dragon CR Slap The Idea is just about a little brother and his three older brothers going thru each day of there lives. I do wish to be little brother though *raises hand* I ugh need this expanded on I'm lost. Like what needs to be expand, the time or wait for another person or I should expand or change my paragraph I made in complex. well the plot in general really. I thought of a more explain type of plot. It's not that big though. The three brothers lost there parents in a car crash, they were with them if course but only they survive. Now of days they have to take care of many problems since they are gone, money,food and shelter managements. ok and ur oc is paying the troublemaker love music wants to play the glue so all that's left is the strict brother that take care of all the financial and is really serious right?
Basically like that, yes |
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Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2014 1:19 pm
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CR Slap Elementis_Dragon CR Slap Elementis_Dragon CR Slap Like what needs to be expand, the time or wait for another person or I should expand or change my paragraph I made in complex. well the plot in general really. I thought of a more explain type of plot. It's not that big though. The three brothers lost there parents in a car crash, they were with them if course but only they survive. Now of days they have to take care of many problems since they are gone, money,food and shelter managements. ok and ur oc is paying the troublemaker love music wants to play the glue so all that's left is the strict brother that take care of all the financial and is really serious right? Basically like that, yes |
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Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2014 1:26 pm
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Elementis_Dragon CR Slap Elementis_Dragon CR Slap Elementis_Dragon CR Slap Like what needs to be expand, the time or wait for another person or I should expand or change my paragraph I made in complex. well the plot in general really. I thought of a more explain type of plot. It's not that big though. The three brothers lost there parents in a car crash, they were with them if course but only they survive. Now of days they have to take care of many problems since they are gone, money,food and shelter managements. ok and ur oc is paying the troublemaker love music wants to play the glue so all that's left is the strict brother that take care of all the financial and is really serious right? Basically like that, yes alrighty I will post in roughly an hour I'm at work and using my phone makes it hard to make a post lol sweatdrop
That's okay I can wait |
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