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Something to do on my spare time and for the people of Gaia. Usually music videos of what I like and what I feel like at the time.
Naruto Themed Fanfiction(Chapter 5)
Thank you to everyone who has been reading these fanfictions. My chapter 2 has had 60+ views. Thanks to everyone who viewed it. I will have to post this right now. But, if you watch this while waiting then you'll be satisfied for the time being. The time is also after the time skip. This means that everyone is mostly 15. So, this is why everyone has more attacks and ninjutsu than usual.

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The next day after Lucky's and Loki's Minion's fight they decided to go take a walk around town. They had their weblos unshaved and were just kidding about last night. Lucky then said as they walked past a ramen shop, "I've got to tell you something. My name's not really Lucky. It's Logan."

"Yeah, well, my name's not Loki's Minion," Loki's Minion said.

"Oh, really? I thought it was that. Can't someone have that name?" Logan joked around.

"Shut up! My real name is Zac. Just call me Zac." Zac went into the ramen shop very hungry. It was his two hour eating time.

Logan entered after him and saw Kakashi in there. He was getting a bowl of ramen. "Hey, that's Kakashi. Let's watch him eat to see what's under his mask," he said to Zac.

Zac looked over to Logan after checking it was Kakashi. "You're right, Logan," Zac said. Kakashi got his bowl of ramen at that point. Then, Zac got his right after. "Hold on! Let me eat first," Zac said. He picked up the chop sticks to eat.

"Idiot," Logan said. He smacked Zac on the head lightly. "Just watch him." Once he looked at Kakashi, though, he had finished his ramen. "What? That's not possible. I thought that Naruto was the fastest ramen noodle eater in the leaf village." He was shocked with big eyes and a gaping mouth.

Zac looked over to see an empty bowl in front of Kakashi. "Don't you ever want to savor the noodles?" he asked.

Kakashi answered, "I'm a busy man. I don't have time to savor the taste of food. I just eat quickly and leave." He left the shop with his mask unmoved of what it was before he ate.

Both, Zac and Logan, were in a state of shock. Zac ate his bowl of ramen noodles quickly and went outside with Logan. They bumped into Choji who was entering the shop and they couldn't get past him.

Choji yelled, "Why aren't you letting me through?! I need to get my half hour meal in or I'll just die!" He did some hand signs and yelled, "Human boulder!" Choji transformed into his human boulder form and rolled at Logan and Zac.

"Do you want him or shall I?" Logan asked.

"I'll take him," Zac said. He made a blizzard ball in his hand and ran at with Choji hitting him out of the leaf village still in his human boulder form. "That was sure easy. I think Choji needs to train more instead of eating so much."

"Yeah, that's for sure," Logan said. They both walked some more and passed Sasuke who saw Zac and Choji fight.

"Gosh, that was a lot of power. I can't believe he did that with just that small bit of chakra," Sasuke whispered to himself. "I need to train a lot more if I'm going to beat Itachi." Sasuke went away to train for a while. Zac and Logan kept walking on through the town.

Zac and Logan walked into the forest. They eventually came to Neji's, Ten Ten's, and Rock Lee's training ground. Rock Lee was finally healed of his broken arm and leg. He was doing push ups faster than anything. Neji stopped hitting a training post to face Logan. "Hey, you," Neji said to Logan.

"Who me?" Logan asked facing Neji.

"Yeah, you. I want you to face me and Ten Ten in a two way battle," Neji said. Ten Ten stopped her training to take the side of Neji. "Yeah, and we're going to win."

Zac stepped up to the side of Logan to be parrallel with Ten Ten. "Oh, yeah. Well, what if I say that we're going to win? What then?" Zac was being a bit smart allically to urge Neji on.

"Why you..." Neji said as he charged Zac with byakugan and Juken at Zac's chakra points. But Zac blocked Neji's attempts fully.

"A bit testy are we?" Zac said urging Neji on even more. He using one hand to block Neji's strikes while creating a blizzard ball in the other.

Meanwhile, Ten Ten surprises Logan with a few kunai and shurikens at him. But Logan just does a substitution jutsu excpecting her attack. "Come on Ten Ten! You can do better than that!" Logan cries out from a tree branch behind Ten Ten.

"How about this, then?" Ten Ten says as she throws a flurry of shurikens, kunai, needles, and bombs at Logan. But Logan just jumps up and comes down on Ten Ten.

"You really need to do better than that." Logan held Ten Ten on the ground with her arms behind her back. But she foiled it by cutting Logan on the hand with a two-sided kunai.

"Here! I bet you can't handle this!" Ten Ten said as she pulled out a scroll and spun it in the air. Weapons from everywhere came out of the scroll in every direction. There were these weird bombs that spread kunai in every direction, too.

"Oh, fudge," Logan said as he saw the weapons come from every direction around him. The only thing he could do was to use earth style jutsu and enter the earth. But even as he did four weapons hit him in the forearm, shin, shoulder, and thigh. The one on the shin bounced off but the others still affected him. He grabbed Ten Ten from under the ground and pulled her under until her head was the only thing showing on the surface.

Zac was still chargin his blizzard ball and blocking Neji's attacks. But Neji stopped at a certain point and was using his Juken to hit at a distance. It wasn't as accurate, but it still worked to hit chakra points. He hit about ten of the 361 points only weakening Zac. But Zac used his speed to run up to Neji and send him flying the same as he did with Choji with his blizzard ball.

"Well, that was easy enough," Zac said stretching his arm to help out the chakra points flow again.

"Nooo!" Ten Ten yelled. "Nejiii!"

Logan just ignored her and kept walking with Zac, but they were stopped by Rock Lee. "That was amazing! I have never been able to beat Neji! But I see that you have and I must learn your ways. Will you let me join your group?" He had some anime sparkling eyes on.

Zac said, "No way! You're not going to be in our group. We're just a two man group, anyways." He kept walking on with Logan leaving Rock Lee crying and Ten Ten stuck in the ground.

They both walked a ways before they found Might Guy pumping his weblos outwards. The director said, "Nice job, Guy."

"Thanks. You know it's hard being a male dancer, especially when you have to shave your weblos," Might Guy said to the camera. He held out a bottle that was labeled Weblos Splash. "That's why I use Weblos Splash!"

A singer sang, "Weblos Splash! You sexy mother..." The rest was beeped out. It was probably to not let the little kids here any bad words.

Logan and Zac just stood there with their eyes as wide as they could go. "Let's go," Logan suggested. "Like...right now, maybe." They both left in a flash but were stopped by Sasuke.

"Hey, you with the blizzard ball. I want to face you," Sasuke said to Zac.

"It looks like everyone wants to face me today," Zac said as he stepped up to face Sasuke. Sasuke responded by creating his chidori.

"I need to defeat this guy. Otherwise, I won't be able to defeat Itachi," Sasuke said to himself. He ran at Zac, but Zac only punched Saskuke in the face to stop him. He kneed him in the stomach then put Sasuke in a headlock to his waist facing his back. Zac punched Sasuke's side with his fist over and over again. He created a rasengan then blew Sasuske up in the air over the village.

"Wow, that's the third one. Are there anymore to blow away?" Zac said anxiously.

Sakura and Ino were watching the whole time and got super angry at Zac. They both yelled at the same time, "Agh! We're going to kill you!" They both beat up Zac, and he had to get bandages and got a black eye.

Logan laughed at Zac. "You just got beat up by a girl, man. That's sad. So sad." He stopped laughing to see Kiba facing him.

"Hey, are you the ones beating everyone up?" Kiba asked.

"Yeah, it's really fun. But they start it. Not us," Logan said.

"Great! I want to face you, then!" Kiba said. He let Akamaru copy him and Kiba took the pill that made him into a beast. They used fang over fang on Logan scratching him terribly. But Logan just made a fire element ball and hit Kiba with it. It burned him up and forced him to run away for a lake. Akamaru ran after him to stay with Kiba.

"That was so boring. I can't believe that Kiba made the mistake of facing me. It's so uncool." Logan sat back down with Zac to help him heal. Shikamaru was hiding in the shadows to make sure he wouldn't fight Logan and Zac.

"It's pretty good that they're too dumb to go searching for an opponent. Except, they already beat most of the chunin in the village. Ugh, I'll just come out of hiding. It's too much of a hassle. If they find me, they find me. They're not going to try and pick a fight with me," Shikamaru said while hiding. He popped out of the shadows and Logan saw him.

Logan said, "Hey, Shikamaru. How..." Logan was cut off in his sentence by Shikamaru running away at full speed. "What's his problem? I just wanted to ask how he was today. Sheesh."

Gaara approached Logan and Zac as to face them in a battle but just walked back away. "I won't stand a chance. Oh, well."

Logan said, "Why is everyone being weird today? They either want to challenge us to a battle or run away from us."

"I think you smell bad," Zac commented holding a steak to his black eye. "Did you bathe last night?"

"Of course I did, dufus. You slept over and my house," Logan reminded Zac.

"Oh, yeah. I remember. Don't blame me for forgetting, though. I just got the crud beaten out of me by two girls." Zac rested to try and keep his mind fresh. Then Hinata came up to Logan and Zac.

Hinata said, "Um...I was just wondering. If...you would..." She was doing her usual finger thing when she was nervous.

"Yes, Hinata," Logan said. "What is it?"

"I was just wondering if...if you would go out with me." She was still doing her finger thing.

"Well...I already have a..." Logan was cut off by Zac, though.

"That'd be great!" Zac exlcaimed. Logan smacked Zac on the head to make him fall to the gorund.

"Don't take up on that offer! She's going out with Naruto and you know it!" Logan yelled at Zac.

"Yeah, I know. But I don't have a girlfriend," Zac complained. Naruto suddenly came running to the street that they were all on.

"There you are!" Naruto exclaimed pointing at Logan and Zac. Hinata ran over to their side for protection. "Are you pervs trying to steal my girlfriend?" he yelled.

"Oh, no we're not. We know she's your girlfriend and..." Logan was cut off again by a stupid Zac comment.

"Of course we're taking her! She was sick of you and needed a real shinobi to take care of her," Zac said interrupting Logan.

"Why you! I'll never forgive you!" Naruto yelled to the sky as he went into his one-tail fox form.

Logan nodded at Zac to say that they should end it for good this time. They both picked up Hinata with their inside hand. They created their special fire ball and blizzard ball. The twosome ran at the angered Naruto with their elemental balls and hit him with them. Naruto flew the same as all of the others. Logan and Zac threw Hinata right after they hit Naruto so that they could end up together.

Logan yelled to them flying, "There's your girlfriend! She's all yours!"

Zac asked stupidly, "Why couldn't I go out with Hinata?"

Logan sighed. "You just don't understand. Do you?"

"What? I'm just asking why." They walked off home to have dinner and sleep over at Zac's house this time.

"Let's just go home. We're sleeping over at your house, tonight. Okay?" Logan said.

"Okay. But just tell me why I can't go out with Hinata! Come on, tell me!" Zac said over and over again until they got to his house.

THE END

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This fanfiction is finally finished. I tried to make the last chapter as good as I could. It was hard, though since I was bored during all of the fighting scenes. But, I still thought it was pretty good. I am glad that this fanfiction is over, though. I'm definitely glad! Thank you for reading! And leave comments! 3nodding





 
 
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