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DJ homicidal
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enter the mind
poem time whee

enter the mind....

a plan
a plot against the one i called friend
my heart can hold oh so much
he added more hate
he made me think the unthinkable
he made me cry tears of blood
a vendeda
as i plan my plot
and plot my plan
i think of the hate you brought me
the tears
the broken soul
as the plan is over
i die
i die with a heart filled with guilt and yet i am happy
as my soul wonders to the next life
my death draws near
as my heart fades away
i will always remember what you did to me
you will resign in a special part in my heart, my memory,my soul
as i die in my sleep
i am the fallen child
i am a nobody to you
at least when i die i never feel th pain
the pain of sorrow .






friends @ RSS and JAYSUNE you know who i am talking about and who made me die inside

in loving memory of My souls


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sazu1
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comment Commented on: Wed May 23, 2007 @ 12:27am
hmm good way to express yourself!! nice although I'd make it a "******** you" poem instead and switch plot and plan so it's plot my plan and plan my plot kind of thing.Xd
wicked though. mrgreen


comment Commented on: Wed May 23, 2007 @ 12:45am
thanks errin whee and now i am off to correct the mistakes 3nodding



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Ronin19
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comment Commented on: Wed May 23, 2007 @ 12:51am
interesting poem. very dark indeed, it suites you.


comment Commented on: Wed May 23, 2007 @ 01:19am
Ahhh, I always did love your poetry x3

Great job D :3



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Teoka
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comment Commented on: Wed May 23, 2007 @ 02:35am

Yeah, awesome job! biggrin heart

I think keeping it like this is better. If you get all "screw you," they'll be even more motivated to put you down, while this guilt-trips them. Poetically speaking xd *fagging, kinda*


comment Commented on: Wed May 23, 2007 @ 11:15pm
GAWD.

stare

I know you don't like him, but JEEZ! Couldn't you be using the energy you use to hate hi to love someone else instead? So wasteful....

AHEM, anyways, about the poem: I liked it. :3 your poems are always so nize and dark and relazing to read. I didn't like the plan a plot and plot a plan thing, though, coz even though it sounds kinda cool, it also sounds really repetitive, especially since you used those words a lot.

Still, it was like, awesome in a bottle of vodka, man. heart



Jaysune
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DJ homicidal
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comment Commented on: Wed May 23, 2007 @ 11:21pm
who is there to love i have no boyfriend crying


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