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Heavens_Chaos's Journal I like Poetry and i like to wright poems i will be posting my poems here and other poems that i like


Heavens_Chaos
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Warped and Twisted
Harsh words and violent blows

Hidden secrets nobody knows

Eyes are open and hands are fisted

Deep in side I'm warped and twisted

Too many when's too many whys

Too many tricks too many lies

Nobody's special nobody's gifted

I'm just me warped and twisted

Sleeping awake and choking on a dream

Listening loudly at a silent scream

Call my mind, the numbers unlisted

Lost in someone so warped and twisted

On my knees alive but dead

Look at the invisible blood I've bled

I'm not gone my mind has drifted

Don't expect much I'm warped and twisted

Burnt out, wasted, empty, and hollow

Today is just yesterdays tomorrow

The Sun has dried out the ashes and they have been sifted

I'm still here, warped and twisted





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saaved83
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comment Commented on: Mon Dec 27, 2004 @ 01:29pm
Wow... very good poem... I love it, great metaphors... and the imagery is just wow... I have nothing more to say... I would like a copy of it... but as with all literature I must ask permission... tis great!!!


comment Commented on: Sun Feb 27, 2005 @ 05:44pm
Thats pretty good, I like it



Aiden Vizera
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lilly_sath
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comment Commented on: Thu Jul 14, 2005 @ 04:53am
You're cool.nice poem! cool


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