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My life... my pain... my death...
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The truth
Not yet known
Hells unleashed,
You can’t keep it down

It will play with your mind
Screw with your sanity
******** with your heart.

Till you’re laying on the floor
Begging for more

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Hurt no-one
Kill no-one
Destroy no-one

These simple things you taught me
But do you honor them yourself?
Tell me have you never hurt
Never killed
Never destroyed

Look me in the eyes and honesty say you have not.
But you can’t… for you know its not true.
My blood is on your hands
My pain is caused by you

One more and you will have
Destroyed me.






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Spike the Dark Dragoon
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commentCommented on: Sat Jun 16, 2007 @ 01:32am
You have talent
this is good
i think a good name (if you want to use it) is Truth (yeah its simple but hay it works)


commentCommented on: Sat Jun 30, 2007 @ 09:19pm

Emma's good at poetry 3nodding ... Ever try going to a group? then again, your creative-ness gets obstructed by criticism (unless you don't take it from anyone)... Keep writing!!

www.toothycat.net

There's a lot of good resources that you can use there, and poetry for inspiration. I find a majority of the stuff dark, or pleasantly eccentric (read:strange)..."Chains" is the first one I read...

On a related note, (it being on the same page), there are bardic songs that tell some interesting stories, especially if you look for hidden meanings, and that stuff... (beware of looking too deeply, as it sometimes results in headache XD)...


Talk to you later,
Chise

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