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Do not venture too deeply into this labyrinth, for you may never come out again...
Indecision Severs the Soul
The ghost of you left on my mind
A memory of souls entwined
Shake it off and carry on
I'm better off with these feelings gone

It strikes again and I'm wanting more
The warmth again down to my core
Burn it off, melt it away
So much hysteria, it makes me say

CHORUS: To remain alone, live for myself
Abandon emotion, remain a shell.
Will quiet my soul and silence my yells
Love will send me to my Hell.

Cut me open, let my guts to the ground
These feelings are only wieghing me down(OR: Leave my emotions to Hell's Hounds)
Fill me with hate and set me loose
Put me in control of humanity's noose.

Your gaze has made me hypnotized
To just look away would be wise
But I am captivated by your grasp
Yet I cannot help but to ask

CHORUS: Will remaining alone, living for myself
Abandoning emotion, remaining a shell
Quiet my soul and silence my yells?
Will falling in love put me through Hell?

BRIDGE: Indecision, a wrathful nightmare
Do I run, or do I dare?
My heart has caught me in a snare.


CHORUS: Will remaining alone, living for myself
Abandoning emotion, remaining a shell
Quiet my soul and silence my yells?
Will falling in love put me through Hell?

CHORUS: To remain alone, live for myself
Abandon emotion, remain a shell.
Will quiet my soul and silence my yells
Love will send me to my Hell.



NOTE: Please give comments on which of the two lines in the verse after the first chorus you prefer. "These feelings are only wieghing me down(OR: Leave my emotions to Hell's Hounds)"

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  • User Comments: [3]
    [+Staria+]
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    Mon Jun 11, 2007 @ 08:38pm


    Beautiful!
    I'd say "These feelings are only wieghing me down"
    3nodding


    The Arcane Soul
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    Sat Jun 16, 2007 @ 01:23am


    i would keep "These feelings are only wieghing me down" it feels much closer to the songs meaning when i read it, which was actually expressed really well


    Beyond Terror
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    Fri Jul 27, 2007 @ 11:34pm


    Very nice...

    "Leave my emotions to Hell's Hounds" sounds like something I would have written but I agree with the other two comments, "These feelings are only wieghing me down" fits better.


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