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The Life of an unfairly treated Grrl.


octopyierte12
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Chapter 1
The brutal beginging
"Onyx, you can examplev first. You're being timed. Mount Crystal, ready, set... go!"
said Onyx Deaths riding teacher, Miss Applemerry, the meanest teacher EVER!It was test time at the Equestrian Academy for young Girls, or E.A.F.Y.G. They were racing against Miss Applemerry down Killers Lane, through the Autmn leaves, and back. Onyx D. was of course the best, even better than Miss Applemerry, so Miss Applemerry puts out traps. Today, it was the snake. Off they ran to the end, Onyx winning, then for the turn, up brings the snake, Crystal is suddenly at a hault. While Onyx hears Miss Applemerry chuckle as she slides by. But Onyx has a few tricks up her sleeve too! She speeds up to Miss Applemerry, kicks leaves up, and one is a direct hit onto her face, mucky from the mud, it sticks to her face. She is unable to see, slides off her own horse, Mupid pearl.





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b-baldwon
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comment Commented on: Tue Jun 19, 2007 @ 12:03am
cool i love it wen people put stories in their journals im gonna start 1 soon


comment Commented on: Thu Jun 21, 2007 @ 10:21pm
onyx??? is this like digimon or pokemon i forget which its from...


jk it sounds cool have fun i gave up on mine cuz i though up a great ending but i no wanna make u all jealous jk i couldnt come up with squat



Reicalg
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1_BLOOD_1
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comment Commented on: Tue Jul 17, 2007 @ 06:29pm
cool story!


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