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Rain all my senses have disappeared numbness taking hold i let it pour on to me soaking me to my core i can't feel my pain my sorrow all i feel is the cool drops cascading from the dark rolling clouds on to my skin i see lightning but i stay letting it wash me away A/N : This poem is really what i feel when it rains: totally numb to everything.I love the rain.

Posted by: haruko-takun Sat Jun 23, 2007 @ 12:08am

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Shin Duelist Paris
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Commented on: Sat Jun 23, 2007 @ 01:35am


	it is good that you can portray your feeling but you should be more careful on how you word it... I dont thin numbnesses ie even a word sweatdrop

Commented on: Sat Jun 23, 2007 @ 03:59am


	hmmmmm you may be right let me check....ha! numbness is a word! yay! but i just noticed my typo.....i meant to say numbness...i'll fix it sweatdrop

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