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Emptiness
There is a place I want to be
But I cannot find
A life I wish to live
But it's only in my mind

That hollow space is what is left
Been there since that day
And since I am here alone
I continue to search far away

It is like a ghost town
You can feel the lonely chill
Nobody out there
So I am back to the way I feel

It hurts to be alone everyday
And not feel what I need
I don't wanna be in this darkness
And suffer from pain's greed

Someday I will make it
Someday hopefully it will end
But for now I must please my peers
They see me smile, but don't know I pretend

~By- J. Watson~






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Nymphadora Tonks rox
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commentCommented on: Sun Jun 24, 2007 @ 10:34pm
OMG i love it!!!!!!!


commentCommented on: Sun Jun 24, 2007 @ 10:50pm
its a nice poem....*hugs* but dont let this sadness consume u



OcToBeRs_NiGhT_SkY
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Yuki C
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commentCommented on: Tue Jun 26, 2007 @ 12:30am
you are so good at poems


commentCommented on: Sat Jul 07, 2007 @ 10:58pm
How inspiring...xD Wow didn't that explain someone I know. Very touching. ^^


I'll figure out something to put here eventually. So...

Bite me. ^^

writing_addict
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mayplesyrup284
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commentCommented on: Fri Jul 13, 2007 @ 04:27am
Thats sad....


commentCommented on: Mon Jul 16, 2007 @ 06:11am
I feel like this, too.



LastLeftStanding
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MadeUpStories1713
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commentCommented on: Thu Sep 06, 2007 @ 12:49am
this is an awesome piece writing... it made me cry the first time i read it... and then when you made the video i started to cry again... i know how it feels having the life you wish to live but it's only in your head... and pretending everything is okay when really everything isn't okay... i know what's it's like to be alone in a ghost town *hugs*


commentCommented on: Fri Apr 04, 2008 @ 03:15am
Like the girl ahead of me said, I also know how it feels to to go that exta mile, faking a smile, when inside you feel like crying because inside you know you're dying, and their is nothing you can do about it. Having a place where you want to be, than waking to find it's all a dream. You want to cry, and no that no matter how hard you try you can never have your heart be satisfied. I know this emptiness you feel, you are not alone.



meg meg1357
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