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i got bored so i decided to put one of my stories on here. its about my naruto character, Kira Uchiha.

~chapter 1- a nightmare- the day it all started

"got... to get... away!" kira said as she was running. "he will be coming after me soon." kira ran and hid in an alley. "i only have enough chakra to do this one last thing." kira said. "Clone Jutsu!."

kira is known for her life like clones. she has been known to have tricked even the smartest ninja with them including itachi.

"there, now to hide." kira said to herself as she ran away, leaving the clone in her place. "kira, where r u?" someone called "now kira, u know theres no use in running." the person turned into the alley kira's clone was hiding in. "o, there u r." the person said. "why r u doing this?" kira's clone asked. the person was coming closer to kira, "wait... stop!" kira screamed, but he didnt listen. "no... stop itachi... itachi!" "ha ha ha" itachi said as he raised his blade above kira's clone's head.

and for a while itachi actually thought he had killed kira, until recently...


...thats what i have so far, i will up date it when i can, u can leave me ideas if u want.






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sasori ninja
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commentCommented on: Wed Jul 04, 2007 @ 02:48am
i think you should add a steamy love scene... yes... definately! be detailed!


commentCommented on: Fri Jul 06, 2007 @ 06:59am
You should have a time skip thingy

like when she has a nightmare about taht night and wakes up older like idk

do u get what im trying to say well write



Bandahh
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luna_pure_heart
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commentCommented on: Thu Aug 23, 2007 @ 04:53am
pretty good start


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