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What's inside my mest up mind.
My poems and different little things, I wont put very many things in here so ya...
Poem: Stone Heart
Stone Heart



I bite my lip
I cast my spell
I want to scream
I want to yell

You held me close
I cry my tears
My first true love
In many young years

You promised me
to never let go
Not in the rain
Not in the snow

I was so happy
With you right there
But now there’s only emotions
And even more despair

My heart is now stone
No more tears will I cry
I can’t believe you again
I can’t even try

My eyes are dry
My heart it gone
But I won’t be weak
I’ll stay strong

Someday maybe
I’ll find someone new
Even though
I wish it was you.


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  • User Comments: [2]
    Im__Jung-Woo
    Community Member





    Tue Jul 24, 2007 @ 05:44am


    You have nice ideas. I'm not sure if it's out of boredom, inspiration, or your way of ending emotions that have gotten to over the top, um… like calming down, or sorting your thoughts out… so to speak. I’d like to give you constructive criticism, lol, but it all relies on your reason for writing your poems. Sorry, I’m being confusing… even to myself… I think.


    kedelko
    Community Member





    Sat Apr 26, 2008 @ 03:56am


    i love it^^ i want to cry now *bee's emo in corner*


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