You have nice ideas. I'm not sure if it's out of boredom, inspiration, or your way of ending emotions that have gotten to over the top, um… like calming down, or sorting your thoughts out… so to speak. I’d like to give you constructive criticism, lol, but it all relies on your reason for writing your poems. Sorry, I’m being confusing… even to myself… I think.
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Sat Apr 26, 2008 @ 03:56am
i love it^^ i want to cry now *bee's emo in corner*