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My life in words,poems,and pictures.
A lone fallens cry
I am no more as I cry,
I wish I wish I could die,
yet no matter how much i try to hide the pain,
it comes back and i hide in vain.

In the rain i cry tears of blood from my burning eyes,
they shine in pain as the other fallens walk away,
I am a shame to my brothers even in the leaders eyes,
for now this fallen is a stray.

I was bad and the leader loved me but i mad him mad,
I walked out on him and now he is dead,
for I killed my love as his blood runs down my fingers.

This is the fallens cry....






User Comments: [4]
ware wolf vampire
Community Member





Tue Aug 07, 2007 @ 05:02am


you have a life that is sad and i am sorry


Solav
Community Member





Wed Aug 08, 2007 @ 07:17am


very moving and very deep vix, its sad yet beutiful just like u.


SOLDIER-X Genesis
Community Member





Wed Aug 15, 2007 @ 02:08am


Reminds me of my own life vix. It's really good, and can't wait to see more of ur poems. Take care of yourself, and don't forget me, ok?


theredplague9989
Community Member





Mon Sep 10, 2007 @ 02:48am


vix i argee with the others this poem is amazing and it reflects upon u as well as any fallen rpc but ill tell u that in a rp maybe some day


User Comments: [4]
 
 
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