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hey peoples
i got really tired last night and my mind was reeling so i started rambling in my head...soon i realized that it sounded like a poem so i decided to write it down....be warned this is the first peom i have EVER! writen so tell me if you like it, and i haven't thought of a name either but here it goes...

Her hair is like a summer day
Her smile a fleeting as the ocean's spray
Her lips as soft as buttercups
Her frown as sour as lemon-drops
Her rage is like a mighty gail
Yet i wish to help her on her trail
Her love is like the salty seas
Her mood changes with such ease
She won my heart with her charms
I just wish to hold her in my arms
Her head on my shoulder is such bliss
We sealed our fate with a kiss
Alas to this i must confess
Our union is in destress
My love, my love has gone away
To steal my heart another day.....






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The Divine Rose
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commentCommented on: Tue Aug 21, 2007 @ 04:16pm
I'm sorry about your love.

But that is a really good poem. . .


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