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Book of Hell
the crazed feelings of a crazed girl
I Cry(Poem)
Everytime you speak
You hurt me with your words of hate.
Everytime you speak
I die a little inside.
Tears well up inside me
Then you speak again.
The tears are welling up in my eyes
Once again your words of hate fill the air.
The tears are now rolling down my cheeks
You laugh as my tears hit the floor.
Now that you are no longer near
I would think that there would be no more tears.
But your hurtful words stll haunt me loud and clear.
Then I hear your laugh and see your face
This image I can not erase.
So I just cry
And cry some more.
Until I care about you no more.






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Dark The Blademaster
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commentCommented on: Thu Jun 23, 2005 @ 03:39am
you are a very good poem.


commentCommented on: Fri Jun 24, 2005 @ 02:37pm
Wow thats great!

but i accidentally made my character a girl so its not like i'd be in the position to criticise anybody...

redface



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