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|| The Book of Poems ||
Broken Soul
Say your here, save her from herself

She loses her mind to her own reality

Twist it around to save her own sanity

Look through the past through her broken soul

See the child she once was long time ago

Broken heart with no home

Child with a broken soul

A rose at her fingertips

Markings on her eyes and lips

Beatings seen on her skinny frame

Nothing can cover up the pain

Destroying herself for recalling the bad

Death she will find peace

and there she will be free from the beatings

So hold her hand, hold it tight simply say your there by her side for tonight

Comfort her with words that is smooth like silk.

Just ease her broken heart as she slowly draws her last breath.

Tomorrow a new day and a new star plays

among the other broken souls in the night sky.

Give her a pray and wish her good night.


A g a t e o p h o b i a
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  • User Comments: [2]
    A g a t e o p h o b i a
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    Sat Dec 01, 2007 @ 08:01am


    The poem makes no sense, but I'll explain it.

    Its about a teenager girl that is with a boy that had abuse her badly, leading her to a hospital. When she was younger her father use to abuse her hence the fact she is with a boy that hurts her too.

    That night she is going to die and she needs someone by her side. Her mind is confused, she doesn't understand life anymore. She thought being with a guy that hurt her was the best but it wasn't. She dies the next day and her past is remembered by all.

    I don't remember why I wrote this but the first sentence:
    Say your here, save her from herself

    She loses her mind to her own reality

    Twist it around to save her own sanity


    Was how this all started and the story behind it to back it up if anyone asked.


    Oharunsi
    Community Member





    Tue Dec 18, 2007 @ 05:44pm


    Someone will always be there for you :3


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