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i like to help people.if you ever need someone to talk to,i am usually available.
i wrote this poem.please don't laugh

I want to beleive
In the light that I found that day
Because i still have the promise
that i made to you
I want to keep going,never stopping

Like biting into an overripe fruit
I was spoiling myself
I was giving in to my weakness
If i hadn't met you,i'd still...
...be unable to break the walls around me
I'll never forget
the pain that i felt that day
I never want to go back to that place

I want to beleive
In the light that i found that day
Let them laugh and call me a loser
because i'm clumsy
But i can only choose to live my life this way






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Dr Kidney-Theif
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commentCommented on: Mon Oct 15, 2007 @ 03:05am
thoust must ryme.
thou is a WHITE PERSON SO YOU MUST RYME!!! granted we cant ryme well because black people are naturally much better than us at that.
i CAN say this because i am also black but do to a chain of unfrtunate events i am ow white.
damn.


commentCommented on: Mon Oct 22, 2007 @ 01:05am
I think it is lovely poem.



NiftyKitsune
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Axelit90210
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commentCommented on: Mon Oct 22, 2007 @ 10:00pm
heart that is the best silver luv ya


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