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A song I wrote...Remember When
I wrote this song for my dad. We never spend anytime togeather. And as I was looking through some old pics. I got an idea for a song. Its my frist song. Plz comment and tell me what u think and be truthful. And rate it from 1-5. 5 being the great and 1 being bad

Remember When
By: Karljna
To: My dad
11/1/2007


Ooooh! Remember!
Remember when
We all sang along
Remember when
Life was a great big song
When life was fun
And we could dance to any song
We could fly even higher with each passing day
Oh Remember
Remember when
I lost that tooth
Remember when
You got me that book
Remember when
The day I was born
When life was fun
And we could dance to any song
We could fly even higher with each passing day
Oh Remember!
Remember when
We were close
Remember when
You got me that goat
Remember when
I said I love you!
Oh! Remember! Remember!
When life was fun
And we could dance to any song
We could fly even higher with each passing day
Oh Remember!
Oh! Remember when
We went to that lake
Remember when
We lived in that house
Remember when
We hugged
Remember when
We sang that song!
When life was fun
And we could dance to any song
We could fly even higher with each passing day
Oh Remember!
Oh Remember! Remember!
Remember when






User Comments: [9]
Asato Gibran
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Thu Nov 01, 2007 @ 10:47pm


4.5


EchoVoice713
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Thu Nov 01, 2007 @ 10:50pm


8... crying


kasadi-chan
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Thu Nov 01, 2007 @ 10:56pm


Definately a 5!


Hatake_Glenn
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Thu Nov 01, 2007 @ 11:17pm


Great job Karl-ane! Its somewhat sad but good! 5/5


Demon Princess Karljna
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Thu Nov 01, 2007 @ 11:18pm


Greaty job Karl-chan! 5/5


Jon Foremans fan
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Thu Nov 01, 2007 @ 11:53pm


its a very nice song ^.^ 5


dustnechos
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Sun Nov 04, 2007 @ 12:08pm


5.5


Floradora
Community Member





Sat Nov 10, 2007 @ 04:42am


I love your song. Do you have music for it yet? I love how each verse adds more things you remember and how you are reminding your dad of all the good times between the two of you. I love how the things are all simple things, not big expensive things. I also love how it doesn't really end...just gets you set to remember more and more things.


Arekyakaito
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Fri Feb 29, 2008 @ 01:30am


Definitely a 5 ^_^ it's awesome!


User Comments: [9]
 
 
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