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raylanfe
Ch.3
Narrorator: Kiyoshi had no knowledge of this.he thought that she was some strange girl he met out of strang coincedence. He was still angery with her.how could she not love her family?it was a saddining thing for him.

Kiyoshi:Even still,all the pain you were put through,I can’t belive you don’t feel anything but hatered.
Rayven:Well,belive it.that’s just how I am.

Narrorator: There was suddenly a knok at the door.

Kiyoshi: Rayven,don’t try…I’ll get it.
Rayven: Fine with me, I’m comfy.
Kiyoshi: Well hello,how are you today s. KLONG!
Rayven: KIYOSHI!!!!
Man: Well now,you have someone to care for you.[looks at rayven]how cute
Kiyoshi:Ooooowwwww…[rolls over on his side to look at man]how rude!I invite you in and you do this to me?
Man: Well well,I here you talk about rudness?OH HAHA!!FUNNY,YOU TALK ABOUT RUDNESS WHEN YOU KILLED YOUR MOTHER!!!!![rayven see’s the astonished look on kibosh’s face.the look of extreame agony,or pain]
Kiyoshi: Stop…please,stop…
Man: It can’t be helped you have to die for her death sometime huh?
Rayven: Hay! Old guy! Why say that to someone that has family pride?!why not say something like that to me?I,
Kiyoshi: Rayven, please don’t stand up for me…its my own fault,I brought it on my self..
Rayven: …
Man: How touching,how bout I take away every thing important to you?like you did to Akina,your mother,or Dai,your father?
Kiyoshi: I take full responsibility for what I did….and I’ll take the punnishment,too.
Man: Then…SHE CAN CONTRIBUTE TO YOUR PUNNISHMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!BLAM! BLAM!
Rayven: Yaaaahhh!!
Kiyoshi: RAYVEN!!

Narrorator: After the first few shots were fired,the room was filled with smoke.in the time that the smoke was slowly clearing,nobody spoke.it was kiyoshi who broke the scilence.

Kiyoshi: Rayven?[said in worried tone]hey are you okay?HEY WILL YOU ANSWER ME?!!

Narorator: Then frome the smoke…

Voice: Yeah,’m still here..but…that stupid man over their shot me!
Kiyoshi: RAYVEN!!!!
Man: HUH?HOW?I SHOT YOU AT LEAST TWELVE TIMES!!!HOW CAN YOU STILL LIVE?!!!
Rayven: Not gonna tell ya,but your in big trouble.[begins to walk,and then in a flash she stand befor him]
Man: OH!CRA,[WHACK,SMACK BIFF,it’s now lights out for that man]

Kiyoshi: How’d you live through all that?
Rayven: I’m not to big on story telling, ‘kay?
Kiyoshi: ‘Kay….






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yuki432
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commentCommented on: Sat Dec 08, 2007 @ 07:00pm
yo lyra i like ur story


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