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haruko fantasy
You're so near but yet so far, I reach out to you but you can't see me.
You've been blinded by hate and deceit,
Will our hearts ever meet?
I cross the darkness that clouds your heart and cleanse it,
The evil that blinded you has cleared and the first thing you see is me,
With tears in my eyes,
You wipe the tears away and take hold of my hand,
Our hearts merge and our love blossoms into a righteous love.






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Minion Marionette
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commentCommented on: Tue Dec 18, 2007 @ 09:02pm
Its pretty good, I am on my way to getting most of my poetry published into a book. I have some of it on quizilla and the rest in my poetry book here at home.


commentCommented on: Tue Dec 18, 2007 @ 10:04pm
it's very good ^^
keep up the good work 3nodding



Dolvii
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agrinoth
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commentCommented on: Fri Jan 18, 2008 @ 07:53pm
it touches the soul, probably because i see some similarities with my self in there


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