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I REALLY NEED HELP!!!!! :(
Okay then.... i guess its 4 girls only...
and another thing... THIS IS A STORY!!
HIDDEN IN THE SHADOWS


Okay, this is a story im writing, im gonna try to publish it, though im probally not, anyway, this is the prolauge thingy of it...


How long have i been running??? All i know is the mild burning in my lungs has long become searing pain, and every single breath was a knife in the chest. I was sprinting on a deserted highway. My foot's thump on the cement was the only sound, not the lone cry of a starving wolf, not the screech of a low-on-gas car. I was alone.... Alone was never an unfillimiar word, my whole life has been running away one way or another. I am on the canadian AND the american wanted list, and the only crime i have ever commited was being born.

I am XIANNA, daughter of H.I.M.M. yes, his name is HIMM. I know its an acrynom for something, but for what i dont know... Yup, i was 12 and i dont know my fater's name. Or wat his job was, i just know was illeagle. Why else would he have a huge house under 35 feet of dirt? Or have a gun collection with more guns in it than there are grains of sand in all the beaches in the world. No one knew, not 1 of his 63 wives or 1 of his 436 children. WE all hated HIMM.



THATS ALL THAT IM TYPIN!!! smile






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yoroka
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commentCommented on: Wed Dec 26, 2007 @ 03:14am
PLZ COMMENT!!!


commentCommented on: Wed Dec 26, 2007 @ 10:09pm
I COMMENTED!!!!!!!!!XD §§§§§§♫♫♫♫♫♫••••••



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yoroka
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commentCommented on: Wed Dec 26, 2007 @ 11:05pm
no, i mean a REAL comment


commentCommented on: Fri Dec 28, 2007 @ 06:48am
well.....good so far.



DiNo BoY 101
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commentCommented on: Tue Jan 01, 2008 @ 07:06am
a real comment?well..............................................its pretty good right now.......just dont put in any letdowns later,mmkay???cuz i REALLY dont like it when things turn out bad.i hav 2 good examples of that situation...........but yea make the story good and not too random........cuz we ALL kno u are obssessd with pie!!!


commentCommented on: Thu Jan 03, 2008 @ 02:54am
k
PIE



yoroka
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commentCommented on: Fri Feb 01, 2008 @ 06:15pm
PIE TASTES GOOOOOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!!!!!!


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