by readin my journal you have given me temperary control over you mind
im sneakin on so ha! less talk more rokk- freezepop
very romantic
we walk down the beach our fingers intertwined our pulse beating to the sound of love we stop and look at each other i look in your eyes and my heart races i go for a kiss you tense in surprise but relax and embrace and were there for what seems an eternity
ending is funny <span id="test16549429">. . .</span><br/><div id="post16549429" style="display:none; margin-right:75px;"> ok sarah inspired it so she gets the prize so........ i pull back and your laughin i m mad and i realize you stole my gum! theres only one way to get it back so i lean in kiss you and get my gum and a little prize too. i laugh as i hand you back your retainer! we walk back to the car,hands intertwined and our pulse beating to the sound of love</div>
gold i fond that 2 be 2 sweet and u should end it on how and what they did or even that mabye he lend in 2 a kiss and got it on the cheek and got inbarised i hoped i helped 3nodding