This is the one I entered into Round 3. It's still not rated so I don't know if I made it or not yet...I hope I did! I'm keeping my fingers crossed! This is also my newest poem. I wrote it just for the contest! Ya'll let me know what you think of it!
Feelings Undefined
Wonders; there are many
Emotions; states of mind
But do we notice any?
They?re feelings undefined
You question my emotions
But you know that I'm right
Everytime you make a motion
My poem, you'll recite
Happiness is like a bird
That sometimes flies away
Silence is a glorious word
That no one shall hear or say
Life is like the weather
It has its highs and lows
Our days are like a feather
So fragily they flow
Love is like a puff of smoke
That?s always out of reach
Tears are like a tragic joke
Emotion without speech
Words are like a broken heart
How easily they harm
A child is a brand new start
For people that they charm
Insanity?s a crazy voice
That?s always in your head
Lust is like an awful choice
That people always dread
Envy?s like a creature
A selfish, evil beast
Your conscience is you teacher
On your greed, it does feast
Sorrow?s like a mournful song
That?s always sung off key
A broken heart would not feel wrong
If we could all agree
Pain is like a holiday
It comes. It goes. It's done.
Greif is like a sad bouquet
The pain has just begun
Wonders; there are many
Emotions, states of mind
Now we can notice many
We are no longer blind
For the feelings undefined
Will not stay that way long
They'll all go crazy in your mind
'Til you know where they belong...
Now question all the wonders
Every feeling deep within
Don't make to many blunders
Just trust the voice within
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Yep...took me forever to finish but I DID finish it!
 Pup in Fluff · Fri Jul 01, 2005 @ 09:55pm · 1 Comments |
