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a rose in the rain...


ace_frozen1
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i am FROZEN.
glinting ice rolls in waves over my desolate heart,
awaiting the touch from the one for me...
no more fiery passion burns there.
waiting for the one to take away the cold...
to make me feel again.


WORK IN PROGRESS!





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Akila1888
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comment Commented on: Tue Jan 15, 2008 @ 02:26pm
*hugs* I'll take away the cold honey *winks*


comment Commented on: Fri Jan 18, 2008 @ 07:04pm
it's an awesome poem...but it's so sad sad

i get no second glances,
no opportunities or chances
to make the things i've done wrong right
or keep my loved ones in sight
so this much i'll try to do
i'll be your friend, i'll say i love you
i'll hug you close, make you smile,
if only for a short while



apterous_angel
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Liriel_the_Dark-Maiden
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comment Commented on: Mon Jun 30, 2008 @ 06:59pm
This is a really good poem! Can't wait to read the rest of it. *gives u hugs* There! Hope that warms u up!


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