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Knana
comment plz, i wanna no how bad it is
I've fallen in love once before
so the word love I've learned to abhor

so high on love like the finest of drugs
then tripped to the ground, lower than the bugs

My tears fall so slowly down my cheek
While cupid laughs cruelly, my tear duds leak

i don't wish u pain or in a bad bind
Just that once and awhile, I cross your mind...




had a poetic outburst last night and couldn't go to sleep till i wrote it down
how bad do u think it is comments plz?






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KuboTsuki_Hime
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commentCommented on: Sat Jan 19, 2008 @ 12:12am
ooooh that is so good crying emo r u gunna b ok? it must b hard. just talk to me if u evr need to talk to someone, lub u


commentCommented on: Sat Jan 19, 2008 @ 12:49am
Teh NiNjA applauds joo and your poetic abbilities.
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blackie--chan101
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commentCommented on: Sat Jan 19, 2008 @ 12:59am
i rlly liked it i thought it was great and im not just sayin that to cheer u up it was good...at least i thought so mrgreen


commentCommented on: Sat Jan 19, 2008 @ 01:18am
O:
VERY BEAUTIFUL AND WONDERFUL!!



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Dante_fox_vamp
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commentCommented on: Sat Jan 19, 2008 @ 01:32am
Hers the while thing I kinda think it is about me I am sorry ok it is soooooo good ok
I do love you I need to date someone else I know this is not the way to say it but it is the truth ok there I said it all not it all but what I can express not all the crying could not explain how I truely hate what I did ok I don't feel like I deserve you in the first place so if you ever want me back I will ask I promise


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