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Friends r wierd sometimes


MercilessSiren
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well, poetry
Well, some of my freinds are doing poetry, so i thought i would give it a try sweatdrop here goes



There you were so small and sweet

He actually swept you off your feet

How much I loved you so

He did not know

He killed you right infront of me

But now your true soul is free

The man who killed you with his car

I now send to hell's heart

I know that I may sin

But, Kalee, you were my friend

Now my heart is so in pain

You were so kind, just like rain



yeah I have to admit when I wrote this I couldn't stop thinking about her,and yeah I started crying right in the middle of typing this. I'm sorry if it didn't make sense or something but yeah i came up with it a minute ago,
Kalee was my Australian sheperd and Blue heeler mix, she was hit by a car on
August 31,2007. I had just let her out of our dog pen and I sat on our deck watching her, and lik most dogs they love to chase cars . Kalee was killed right before my eyes.. my dad and i buried her, and i cursed at the man who had killed her I so wanted to send him to hell myself, I loved Kalee, she was lik the sister I never had. and the sad thing was a couple days later I was going to visit her grave, and we live in the country so an animal of somesort had dug her up, anyway I can't talk anymore so I hope you enjoyed





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MercilessSiren
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comment Commented on: Tue Mar 04, 2008 @ 08:48pm
sweatdrop


comment Commented on: Wed Mar 05, 2008 @ 12:07am
layna im really sorry for what happened..... cry this poem is great!!!!! blaugh and i curse the man to who didnt care or apoligized!!!!!!! scream stressed



Mandy_Candy_2013
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comment Commented on: Wed Mar 05, 2008 @ 11:40pm
and the funny thing is that she was killed by a white truck, and lik my dad was there and he didn't recognize the truck so i will lik never get my revenge so now every time a white truck goes by, i flip them the bird sweatdrop


comment Commented on: Sat Mar 08, 2008 @ 04:56am
whoa...never knew you were that mean...lol blaugh



Mandy_Candy_2013
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MercilessSiren
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comment Commented on: Sat Mar 08, 2008 @ 05:06am
YEAH, well, now u ya know, *stare* was that a white truck i just saw go by....... stare


comment Commented on: Sat Mar 08, 2008 @ 07:20pm
thats so sad , but its a very good poem.. cry


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MercilessSiren
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comment Commented on: Sun Mar 09, 2008 @ 01:02pm
thx. i miss her alot sweatdrop


comment Commented on: Mon Mar 17, 2008 @ 11:33pm
hi.i kno how u feel.my dog died on mothers day and i cant seem to forget it.its sad but very good poem



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MercilessSiren
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comment Commented on: Thu Mar 20, 2008 @ 04:49pm
thnx. u should of seen how upset i was omg i was lik screaming and cursing and cussing....i cried for what seems lik forever sweatdrop


comment Commented on: Mon Mar 24, 2008 @ 09:56pm
i did the same thing but i think my mom was the saddest



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MercilessSiren
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comment Commented on: Tue Mar 25, 2008 @ 03:48am
and you know that when u think about her u know she doesnt want u to cry but to always remember her sweatdrop


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