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Love is the Moon

Love is the Moon
An almost unreachable beauty.
The only true light,
In the night sky of life.

Love forever changes,
Like the phases of the moon,
Waning, and Waxing,
And sometimes not visible at all.

But one day we’ll all reach the moon,
Where everything is brighter,
And the weight of the world is lifted off your shoulders,
And the nights never end.






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Wolf Apple
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commentCommented on: Tue Mar 04, 2008 @ 10:15pm
Oh wow! That is truly breath taking! Lovely piece you have there Ray!!


commentCommented on: Wed Mar 05, 2008 @ 03:26am
this is great so true i love it heart



Your love is poison
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MizerVonGuise
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commentCommented on: Sun Mar 09, 2008 @ 12:18am
I like it...
better then i can do
Though it dose not ryme...and I can't find the rythem
...
It's just....right.
Thank you.


commentCommented on: Tue Mar 11, 2008 @ 04:57pm
I like that! It's beautiful! heart



-M a i k a i - U h a n e-
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iFamouSBarbiiE
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commentCommented on: Wed Mar 12, 2008 @ 11:33pm


blaugh AwW ThAT SOooO SwEeT.. r You tRying 2 Say that 2 some 1


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commentCommented on: Wed Mar 12, 2008 @ 11:36pm
Its lovely. Who inspired you to make it?



Never_Remembered777
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sakura1990
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commentCommented on: Thu Mar 13, 2008 @ 01:03am
comparing love as a moon seems like a lonely love. domokun


commentCommented on: Fri Mar 14, 2008 @ 12:32am
My gosh that was a beautyful poem
Like its true. sweatdrop



amirzx
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coco333
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commentCommented on: Fri Mar 14, 2008 @ 03:05am
that is so nice! damm ur good!


commentCommented on: Sun Mar 23, 2008 @ 02:57am

this poem is fantastic... biggrin
u ever wonder bout writing lyrics...lol
but this poem's gonna be 1 of ma favorites now.... ^_^


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forever_luv44
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klmn4eve
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commentCommented on: Tue Mar 25, 2008 @ 08:16pm
*sniff* *sniff* so sweet^-^ kawaii^-^ i love the moon~ n the rain~ n the clouds~ heheheee^-^ it's great^-^ i will give it 5 stars~hehehee biggrin xd


commentCommented on: Sat Mar 29, 2008 @ 08:49pm
Wow...I was wrong...Your so...so
Oh,Hell. Your just as corny.
I would love this poetry..and probably even cry, If it was by someone else other than you. stare



Goodless
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1-800-IMAGINE
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commentCommented on: Tue Apr 15, 2008 @ 01:47am
Aww. I love this! You're so deep. ^^. I didnt know you wrote at all really.


commentCommented on: Tue Apr 15, 2008 @ 08:34pm
I love this heart
It's very good.



mikiyo-chan
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