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angel-freds happy place a bunch of entrys about my thought and whatnot mostly poetry i write for a hobby


Judgement_wings007
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heres the first in a series of poems i'm writting
tell me wha u think ^^ heart
*this is just the rough part of it, i'm in process of revising^^*

(fred's angel POV)

"all i can do is gaze from above and sadly watch all the passerbys going to and fro.
(sighs) dear brother, i see u too... standing in front of my grave covered with flowers and dead weeds.
i wish i could be with u...to see u smile again
you wipe away the tears from ur eyes remembering wha had happend ....
your so close yet so far from me that i can't even be there when u need someone.
i wish i could be with u...
but now it seems not even the harps sweet meody can soothe the cry of a broken heart."

*sry this all i got for now^^;; sweatdrop i suffer from witters block XD
oh well, tell what you think of this part and i promise to get the rest up as soon as i can^^

peace out!! heart


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