Welcome to Gaia! :: View User's Journal | Gaia Journals

Your browser has JavaScript disabled. Enable JavaScript on your browser for most GaiaOnline features to work correctly.

View User's Journal

what goes on in my crazy mind

This is basically where i put all my poems



zero period Zero Period warm light from the sun gently rains upon me the wind, blowing through my hair so soft and caressing as I rest in the shade my back against the wall the group of students, to my left chatters quietly away the chemistry, which was saved for today is now finished, few problems left unsolved I await the arrival, of the teacher so the door may be opened but alas, it remains shut -Luke Peterson

Posted by: Yukai Ame Wed Mar 12, 2008 @ 04:40am

User Comments: [1] [add]

Pink Rain Today
Community Member

Offline

Commented on: Mon May 04, 2009 @ 05:22pm


	While your poem isn't super impressive [it's good, though]- how you used the sun to "rain" on you. I've never considered using those sensory details in that way before. I really liked it.

User Comments: [1] [add]