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a poem i wrote... Voices in my head All teh things unsaid fire getting hotter I'm being led to the slaughter Fire getting hotter Voices rising higher Breath's getting faster Hell's becomming my master Demons inside I hear their cries Angels are singing But Hell is winning Hells gates open The fire becons me in I have lost all ways of hoping Heaven will not win Demons taunting laughter My pulse beats faster I have no stand For this I am eternally damned Hells gates close There's no way out This path I chose Is what this is about The music plays Then opens Hells door Then ends my days Hells door will close once more

Posted by: iloveademon Fri Mar 14, 2008 @ 01:23am

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Eyz_Of_Chaos
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Commented on: Sat Mar 15, 2008 @ 03:51am


	I think this poem is interesting and leaves alot to be desired its powerful with yet a hidden message of heaven and hell in battles for the soul great job

Commented on: Sun Mar 16, 2008 @ 10:11pm


	this is very good!!!!!!!! better than anything i can write.

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Commented on: Wed Mar 26, 2008 @ 07:37pm


	ummm.............i've already read this.............hehe anyway yeah i lik it. very emo emo

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