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ok this is one of my storys i dont think its good but tell what you think ok i had to wright for a school asssinment ok sso yeah......... stare

The gift

Zeus the king of the gods and the keeper of time was given a gift, the gift of life. The gift was two new children and both were girls. Gastries was the goddess of stars, as her sister goddess Timestress was the keeper of all time. She controlled time for the humans, the Heavens and the under world. She was more powerful than her father.





Gastries Timestress

When Hades the god of the under world and riches found out that there was another keeper of time he began to devise a sinful plan. He thought to himself, ”If I could get a hold of her I could stop time in the heavens, and erase the time that Zeus has been the king of all gods, then I would become king.” He said with an evil chuckle and grin, “Then I’ll be the ultimate ruler”.



Meanwhile in the heaven Timestress was telling her father about her nightmares. She told her father, “I’ve been having…these strange dreams lately.” “What are they dear?” He replies with a concern look on his face.” “There about-“she gets cut-off by a royal guard.” Zeus your brother Hades is messing with Gastries”
Out in the court yard
‘Come with me Timestress I’m your friend” He hissed “Let Gastries go you fiend” he commanded. “What,” as he is looking. Hades walks up to his brother and glares at him then notice the other daughter standing next to Zeus, then Hades fades into the ground.
The next day the two sisters go in to a meadow of unicorn, Pegasus and pixies.
“Sister I’ll be over there playing with pixies ok” Timestress said with a grin. But little do they know Hades watches down from underneath. ”Now’s my chance.” As he reaches up to grab her she’s pulled in, but a little pixie sees what had happen told Gastries. When she found out she rushed to tell her father. “Father, Father, Hades has Timestress.” She said hastily.







In the under world. “Well, well, well, so you are the keeper of all time?
He said, “Yes I am, but why do you want me? Want can I do for you? All that I can is freeze time.” She said with an odd look on her face “But you can do much more than you know…. I shall teach you, those dreams you been having, you are able see in to the future, that is you can travel through time.” He said with a deep voce. “The future? I can see go through time?” In a confused voce.
Mean wile up in the heavens, Zeus prepares for battle to retrieve his daughter. There is a long journey ahead of them. They traveled through the swamp were the Hydra lived and battled the fierce Calamari.






In the underworld, “focus and concentrate set your mind on time try and go 3 days backward in time.” Hades commanded.” Timestress did what she was told and seceded in traveling in time. Hades was most pleased in her actions that he rewards her by her taking over her body.
Gastries could feel her pain she knew sum thing was bad she rushed out down to the underworld with her father, but it was too late she was already been taken over.
Her sister laughing at them, then under the control of Hades she went farther backwards tin time all they to the time her father was crowned king of the heavens.
she swung her staff and then time was rewritten, Hades was the ruler of both heaven and the underworld .when she returned to her normal time every thing was in chaos, building in ruins, people suffering more and more people died then, both sisters witness the most fearful tragedy, as they watched as their was killed by his brother Hades. When Timestress came to she began to cry. “Why must you do such a horrible thing, he was your brother, an-and you used me to do your biding.” She cried. She toke her staff and ran up to him but he sent his three headed dog Cerberus at her. Gastries saw what happened and made a bow and arrow and fired at the dog’s necks and he went down. When she came to, she used her staff to trivial back through time to fix what she had done. When she returned her father was sill dead they both don’t why. She asked her sister to make a sword and a shield out of stars there more powerful than unicorn’s horn. Before she left, she dipped her body in tears of the unicorn to provide her strength for 1 hour.






When she arrived she raised her sword at him and said “You have no right to live I’ll get my revenge.” The battle went on for hours. She tried to hit him but the tears wore off, Hades got more and more angry he toke his fist it was on fire and punched her in the gut, She flew in to the wall she was very weak. “I won’t give up.” She grabbed her star sword then ran and drove it in to his heart. When she arrived home her sister saw every thing by using her stars to create a mirror to see things that are happing. Days latter every thing was back to normal, except for the lost of their father.

END






User Comments: [2]
Angel of Death Niyaka
Community Member





Tue Mar 18, 2008 @ 02:49am


Oi I remember this story, didnt you get like a C for it?


Shinzenbi_Bunny
Community Member





Tue Mar 18, 2008 @ 11:36pm


crying yes crying


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