well i had an idea for a new story i want to know if its any good add coments por favor!! ill contine the story if i get good reviews
loki's story
i always used to see the world in many diferent ways of corse i saw the world the way it is after i died. i was so mad at the world probily becuse i was a teenager.i was so bored becuse everything was always the same nothing ever changed. well i beter tell u every thing from the begining......
chapter 1 part 1
how i died
''god im bored matt'' i said 'well we can go to my house and plan an egging!''
''matt! how many times do i have to tell u no ill get in troble like the last time'' ''how was i sopost to know a kripple lived in ther!!'' ''tha dosent matter now....... i just wanna do something differe-'' and tghats wen the schoo; bus hit me sort of sad isint it oh well por little loki righ wrong......
ill contine it only if u add a commet telling me to contine
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