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The One Wish (A Short Story I made)

A red sports car driving down a road betwwen two big pounds. A woman drived the car . A man sat in the passenagers seat wearing a black tuxedo.

Another woman chased behind them in a charit. Her long white dress blowed in the windas she road on. Her friend beside her on charite. Her friend's black dress and long hair blowed in the wind too.

The Horese hoovs collup faster to the car. Both the man and the woman look behind them.

"Racheal.What are you doing?",The man asked.

"I want to say to you... I... I lov... I LOVE YOU!",Racheal said turning bright red. redface

"Racheal. Um... Racheal. You have to have your hands on the rope. So it wouldn't get unhitch from the charit. Racheal.",Her friend said tring to get ahold of the rope. stare

"I don't care about that. Vivian.",Racheal said pushing Vivian. scream

The charit lost control and hit against the cement bridge rial.

Vivian got knock off the charit and went over the rial. Her face frozed in shock. eek Her pupil disappeared as she she want over. Her hand let go of the rope.

The one thing I wanted. The one thing I deeply wished for since I was ten. Only one thing was in my way to have the wish I wanted. the thing was... friends and family. They loved me and I loved them. If even one of my friends or family pushes me into some danger that'll kill me. I prayed to God to take me to him. I wasn'y Afaird to loose my body and everything i had on Earth . I prayed so hard.

As Vivian fell, tears came running out of her eyes. crying The last thing she saw, was a yellow blur on top of a black blur. Her black dress and long sleeves cuffs blowed in the wind as she fell head first. The blur grab her hand pulled her close. They both fell down the steep dark place under the bridge.

Racheal the other woman panic on top of the bridge.

"Vivian. You showed me stuff that opened my eyes to see what life was for. I never had a life to look forward to. You never saw your saw your glass half empty. You tol me something. Do you remember what is was?",The man asked. as they disappeared into the darkness.

**My one wish and the one thing in my way to have my wish** The past Vivian voice saying. heart
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