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im me i guess not alot to talk about >.< poetry songs ect
poetry again
the mortal angel flaps his wings
in dark skies of toxic sin
in a world were hatred reins
were heavied hearts suffer needless pain

with hours spent of trickled tears
were success is living through the fear
the mortal angel with wings of white
flaps his wings with all his might
feathers fall crumple and die
the sound of his angelic cry

to death he does fade
his cry a sweet sernade
sweet joyess tears
remove the worlds fear

with hellish screams sin meet's its end
healed are the hearts of men
lifted are the spirits
joyed are the souls
a tale of an angel
all draped in gold






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SilverWolf28
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commentCommented on: Mon Aug 08, 2005 @ 10:50pm
eek that wus really good, id say your best biggrin


commentCommented on: Tue Oct 18, 2005 @ 05:02am
That was very moving. I liked it very much, you are very poetic.



Keito202
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Lilith of the Night
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commentCommented on: Sat Sep 30, 2006 @ 08:08am
this is amazing! i love how you wrote it.

its incrediably moving. good job!!


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