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Ok this entry is an entry of a poem that I know that not a lot of people would care... Until after you read it... If I knew you in person you would be forced to read it with my innocent cute little smile... Not many will give into my cuteness but I don't really care... Hope you comment this poem and tell me if it made you cry or if what you thought of it... Oh and No claiming the poem. If this poem is claimed then they will be in serious trouble with one of my friend's buddies. He told me that he showed it to his buddies and now it's posted all over Iraq. One by One By: Crystal Huff One by one They march out To do their duties Trying to protect Their loved ones Some scared to Die but not Showing it One by two They return Loved ones Dying and Loved ones Crying One by one They march out To do their duties One by two They return One carrying The other Jayda Ookami · Sat Apr 19, 2008 @ 05:52am · 5 Comments


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Vendetta Dog
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Sat Apr 19, 2008 @ 06:24am

I would have to say that it is a decent poem, though to give my person opinion it could use a slight bit of work. It's touching yes, but I'm actually used to more detailed poems. For the type that it is it's one of the better ones I've read. I would have to say you've got a slight talent here, keep it up and don't give up smile

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Sat Apr 19, 2008 @ 08:00am

Great poem! Didnt make me cry, but its frightening how true that poem actualy is. It could actualy fit in with any war that has been fought, not just Iraq.

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Sun Apr 20, 2008 @ 05:53am

needs abit more detail

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Mon Apr 21, 2008 @ 09:08pm

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yey, yey, yey, that was beautiful sis that was really beautiful I loved it so much sis I give the poem two thumbs up way up you go sis you keep writing what's inside your heart you go very, very, very, good little sis very good!

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Thu May 29, 2008 @ 07:51pm

DX I hope I'm not one of the guys being carried. But yeah it does get pretty brutal. I'm not a crying kind of guy but yeah, it is touching.

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