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In this Journal you will find alot of poems I wrote myself along with some other projects im working on....(I would very much so appreciate your comments or thoughts...I love hearing(reading) what you guys think of this stuff. :)
Removing Stitches(A False Hope of Love)
Open Stitches(A False Hope of Love) (Written by:The Black Angel of Chaosx)

So your back into my life?
Don't you know you cut like a knife?

Anyway I'm glad your back

I want to be cut again.
Around the wrist,through the chin
Let blood flow just like our love once did

Down I fall into the endless pool of blood
Drowning in my nightmares here is our love

Now before I die I see every mistake that lead me into your heart

I want to break,you want to stay,I want this to all go away...

In your eyes all you see is glee
But in my eyes your deceased...






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The Black Angel of Chaosx
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commentCommented on: Tue Apr 22, 2008 @ 05:23pm
Hello Everyone smile .....This is possibily my last poem ill post up but if you guys want me to continue with this then I will....your choice.....

Also yes this poem has 3 names.....I couldnt decide on just 1 name so yeah sweatdrop xd .....This poem was originaly dedicated to my ex but it isnt now becasue.....it just isnt.....but I hope you do enjoy this kay!!!!!

Plz comment on your thoughts and oppions and let me know what you guys think kay!!!! Also be crittical on your criticizim!!!!


commentCommented on: Tue Apr 22, 2008 @ 08:00pm
you have this poem posted twice. one is in february 25 08 and april 22 08...LOL
Well anyway it is a good poem.....



deletedforever789
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xXxForgotten DollxXx
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commentCommented on: Tue Apr 22, 2008 @ 08:27pm
Wow... so sad... and yet... kind of happy at the same time. Perhaps twisted is the word I'm looking for. But I like it.


commentCommented on: Sun May 04, 2008 @ 09:22am
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thats deep



reinaita82
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