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the Quarentined

A man in his late 30's came rushing in the room gasping for air."General Grones what is the ergent news?"said Private Todd.Gerenal Grones gasped for air trying to speak'it...it..it is our barrier..."Private Todd hopped out his bunk"WHAT?!?!"General Grones said this weakly"they...escaped...the Quaretined have been freed"Private Todd grabbed his phone calling another General"General McIntrye,General Grones just informed me that the Quaretined has been freed""WHAT?!!?!?ARE YOU SERROIUS?IM ON MY WAY"he said over the phone."General McIntrye is on his way,We need a Med team STAT"Prvate Todd said.General Grones and lieing down on Private Todd's bunk gasping for air"thank you Todd....".Medical Squads rushed in and gasped the Medical leader spoked out outta the silence"this does not look good,ok bring him to E.R Stat".a young student of the Chiefs said'right away sir",he looks weird,look at his torn up shirt"."indeed"he replies and examines back."oh no this is bad"said the Chief,he continues"he has been...infected".Private Todd speaks outta the crowd"WHAT!?!?,no it cant be,Walters is it true?".The Medical Chief said"yes.. look Tood i know he acted as your father when he died in the war..".Todd is leaned over his Infected "dad", and walks out with a sad face he walked into his friends tent and hears a soft gun shot coming from his tent."Todd what are you doing here"?said Corpral Jenkins.Todd talks softly'General Grones just was killed because he was infected".Corpral Jenkins got outta his bunk and hugged his poor friend "Todd im sorry,but wait...that means the Barrier is breached right?".Todd said quickly"yes we gotta warn everyone,c'mon".they both ran out the tent and tells other Officers the delema.The most calm was an assassin,he is a high ranked assassin Todd had not yet ever met the man.The young assassin introduces himself "I am Edward Miller i am 25 nice to meet you".Todd smiled and introdueced himself"i am Private Todd Jones age of 29."They shook hands and Todd moved on to the next person.Todd notices Edward and he walks towards him.Edward noticed him and smiled."hi again Todd"he said.Todd looked at him leaning on the wooden post,"hi Edwa"---Edward interupted"please call me Ed",Todd replys"Oh sorry hi Ed what are you up to"?He smirked and said"nothing much just waiting for the alarm".Todd was puzzled"what?!,how do u know it is going to get off"And in a few minutes and a buzzer went off and Edward smile and said to Todd"showtime kid".Todd smiled and grabbed his Arsenal of weaponary,he took a 9-millimeter pistol and a sawed off shotgun.Todd whispered to himself"this is for you General Grones..i shall Avenge you"as he left his tent along-side of Jenkins and Edward.

to be Contiuned.....

If you have any questions on what happens next plz pm me and ill tell you ^_^






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Queen Evaine
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commentCommented on: Tue May 13, 2008 @ 10:53pm
This is pretty well written. Kind of difficult to read. But the story line is great!!


commentCommented on: Wed May 14, 2008 @ 12:58am
right...



violin_harmony
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HuG_a_NoOb
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commentCommented on: Wed May 14, 2008 @ 10:35pm
eek awesome!! lol ^.^ i want more u gots to write more whee


commentCommented on: Wed May 14, 2008 @ 10:56pm
Wow. That is a really good story so far. I like it! Even though it has alot of grammar mistakes. Sorry. Anyhoo... Nice! biggrin



x-Mistress-Mayhem-x
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