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I'm going to be puting my poetry in it ples read and coment
Angel
An angel with wings so white it turns clouds gray with sorrow. Her hair so soft that it makes breezes bow to their knees. A face so beautiful it makes roses turn red with jealous. Her skin so fragile it makes leafs turn green with envy. Her eyes so mesmerizing she makes water stand still. Foot steps so light that she walks on air. This angel that walks this earth what is her name? Her name is so beautiful it’s heavenly. (Insert name here) the sweet little angel.






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Devyn333
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commentCommented on: Fri Jul 25, 2008 @ 05:41pm
I like how you explained her with the natural colors/actions of non-living things.
Personification is fun =D
She sounds beautiful.


commentCommented on: Sat Aug 30, 2008 @ 01:50am
love the poem it is fabi



Sexy_Preppy_Angel123
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