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<center>My Life as a Teenage Vampire
Part one
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Rating: Oo Er.. Pg-13 question
For: Sexual, er... cant think of the right word. I say this girl is "easy" and hint to sex.

Note: I will always rate high since I dont want to get anyone in trouble with their parnets. Sex will not even be a minor theme in the story, its just to prove a few points here and there.

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"I now introduce the class of 2007, Sandra Adams, Eric Ahrens, James Allen..."
A young girl, about 5" 3', blue eyes, dark blonde hair, leaned against the fence of the football field looking out onto the green grassy field watching everyone as they went to pick up their diploma followed by a hand shake from the principal.

Freshman year was over, and surprisingly not as hard as she thought it would be. She made more friends; got good grades and finished one out of the two years of PE she had to take. In her mind all and all it was a good year...

"GO ERIC!" her friend yelled from beside her nudging her to pay attention, "Come on space cadet, he is almost off the stage!"

"Huh?," Yuffie said dumb founded at what her friend said being lost in her own little world of thoughts. "Oh sorry Carly..."

Her friend just continued talking while watching as Eric sat down after getting his diploma. “Star football player, went to state four times won three. Now that man is fine.... I wish he wasn't a senior. I'll miss having him as a boyfriend... and doing other stuff with him..., "she finished turning to look at Yuffie with a smirk.

Yuffie picked up on what Carly was suggesting and her jaw dropped a little, not expecting to hear that. She shook her head and replied simply, "You are so bad... "

Yuffie was in the "popular group" one of the few people freshman and seniors approved of and wanted to date. For senior boys, popular and "easy" was a good mix. She wasn't like them completely, Yuffie had no desire to sleep around, only drank a little, and didn’t have a six hundered dollar Louis Vuilton bag, and matching LV shoes.
She was like them in some respects. Yuffie was young, pretty and confident about herself, and her family was rich, something that always helps a person’s popularity.

(Whoa... Part one. This is mainly background so things later on would make sence. I hope you like it! Comments Always Loved).

Edited On June 22, 2007. Word change and grammer.






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Teh Ushi-ness
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commentCommented on: Sun Aug 21, 2005 @ 01:08am
I like it so far. *ish excited* twisted You should put Ushi and Tiger in there... just as like background charries or something. We would be honored. (Atleast I would be honored) heart


commentCommented on: Sun Aug 21, 2005 @ 02:21am
Sure! I see if I can work it in. I probally will not be until the 3rd part before you get into a big role through, but I shall put you in somewhere!



icefire26
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Tiger Dream
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commentCommented on: Sun Aug 28, 2005 @ 04:48am
^o^ Yay, we be charries! I like it, keep it up!

~Tiger


commentCommented on: Sun Aug 28, 2005 @ 08:34pm
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Very nice Icey! *huggles*

Moves on to part 2, very good soo far, Im hooked into the story, and only 5 paragraphs xD
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silverashes
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Naritu the butterfly
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commentCommented on: Thu Aug 17, 2006 @ 09:03pm
it is good


commentCommented on: Sat Dec 29, 2007 @ 11:29pm

Hello! I found you through the Threat to Egypt RP and this looks vewy vewy pwomising! 8D *is hyper* Anyway... Few things...
a) I think the word you were looking for was "Sexual Reference"
b) You might wish to delete the "/center" following "Part One"
c) you spelled "hundred" after "and didn't have a six... dollar Louis Vuilton bag" "hindred"
d) When you said, "Yuffie was young, pretty and confident about herself and her family was rich" there should be a comma after "herself." Sorreh if I'm being annoying... Just practicing editting... Lots of it coming up in English. 8|



xxdarowxx
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