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Mŷ ħėąŕŦβŗėąķ
A collection of my poetry.
.o.Words of Angels.o.
Lying alone inside my bed, dreaming of a time, lost inside my own head. I recall a past with a girl whos hair was of the night, wrapped about in a starlit curl. I remember seeing her face, being lost inside her eyes--A fate I could not escape, this capture I did not mind. With every gaze she brought me deeper, with every touch she chained me tighter, the bondage she put me in couldn't possibly be any better. I sigh at the thoughts, lost in them further, when I look back in time and the cost of it all. In my capture I found no greater happiness, in my bondage I found no finer life. Taking my hand over my heart, feeling it struggle, my thoughts are reeling, reeling with trouble..In this bliss there was but one flaw, this love of mine, this dream I saw..She spoke in the words of angels, and heavens secrets she did speak--she said in these words that my heart is just far too weak, she said she can't keep me--that I simply must go..That I do not belong here, that her true love for me will never, ever grow..

So I fell once again, losing my right wing right then. Losing my light, my life, my soul again..So I lay in my bed, lost in my thoughts yet again, thinking about the woman who spoke in words of angels, and stole my soul from sin. Then, just as quick as she did, dropped me right back in again.



(x.x Horrible, ne? I messed it up--I know..It was way better in my head T.T

Be gentle?)





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    Rissykinns
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    commentCommented on: Mon Aug 22, 2005 @ 12:47am
    It's so beautiful. -sniffle- gonk


    commentCommented on: Mon Aug 22, 2005 @ 09:11am
    so sad! i've read depressing poetry lately but that really is very sorroqful....... *sniff* sad very good though.....very good



    Newra
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    commentCommented on: Tue Aug 23, 2005 @ 02:50am
    Often, it's hard to write a depressing poem that actually expresses how you feel and what you are made of. This, for one, is exceptionally good. Strong words. Right down to the point. It almost brings the reader into a different dimension; where they can hurt. Good job. 3nodding

    -Exit


    commentCommented on: Wed Aug 24, 2005 @ 12:55pm
    Dont you hate how things usually sound so much better in your head and when they come out it sounds so wrong to you. Either way, its good. I don't see how it could have been any better in your head.



    eko
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    Zaki
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    commentCommented on: Fri Aug 26, 2005 @ 07:27am
    Badey-kins, I want your poetry talent. :B
    I cant write poetry, really.
    I havent talked to you in a while either... heart *clingness*


    commentCommented on: Fri Sep 02, 2005 @ 04:19pm
    Very poetically written.
    With much feeling.



    -[C.O.C.O]-
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