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Book of Hell
the crazed feelings of a crazed girl
Fallin Angel
Falling from the darkest sky...
Weak and alone...
Lifeless Angel
Broken & Shredded wings
Which couldn't fly...
Whimpers & cries
Only Angel daring to be
Different
Was not accepted in a world that everyone's
Delusional to ones self...
Tears of blood fall from the strongest of eyes...
The weak killed their only source of light...
Rejected and alone as
He falls almost lifelessly to the ground...
Armageddon to the world which is the same
Because creativity can't exist where no one
Dares to be different...
His eyes close as he turns limp
And disappears as
If he never was to exist...
Fallen Angel lost and rejected
Forgotten from a world,
Where I means
We...






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Emotionlessoldier_Shadow
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commentCommented on: Sat Aug 27, 2005 @ 11:22pm
Great Job, Shifter...!
Out of all of your outstanding work, I believe this to be my favorite...
I love it...
To the rest of your work that I have not commented on:
It means a lot, and isn't a debate like mine...
It actually feels like a statement, instead of an arguement...!
Once again, outstanding work...! ^^
.:Shadow:.

Note: I beat you on the first commenting thing, Big Brother, Kirogata...! Ha-Ha! XP Much Love to both you two... (Shifter and Kirogata)


commentCommented on: Sat Aug 27, 2005 @ 11:55pm
Thanks Shadow...Yea i have to say that u did beat him oh well K u will have to wait til next time i write something to be the first in line wink



Shifter3
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Kirogata
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commentCommented on: Sun Aug 28, 2005 @ 02:02am
Wow...thats a first......And I love the poem^^
It actually kinda rings a bell, I feel the same way.


commentCommented on: Sun Aug 28, 2005 @ 01:51pm
Yea isnt it.....what bell does it ring



Shifter3
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Kirogata
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commentCommented on: Sun Aug 28, 2005 @ 09:50pm
The fact of being alone......I was that way for a long time......


commentCommented on: Mon Aug 29, 2005 @ 12:26am
yea so was i



Shifter3
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Kirogata
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commentCommented on: Mon Aug 29, 2005 @ 08:22pm
I'm so glad I met you.


commentCommented on: Mon Aug 29, 2005 @ 08:31pm
yea me too



Shifter3
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