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Hello! This is one of my OC stories. DO NOT FLAME! Also, Dont say that MY main character is attractive to all the boys, when the only people who love her is my other OCs. This is Part Mew mew, but also an elemental story. I DID NOT STEAL ANY CHARACTER ALSO! IF THEY REMIND YOU OF ANOTHER CHARACTER BY THEIR NAME,WEAPONS,OR ANYTHING, ITS NOT THE SAME. Also, SOME CHARACTERS WERE MADE BY MY FRIEND!! The elements I'm Including are as followed(including the characters names):
Earth:
Celia
Joey

Water:
Momoko
Sama

Wind:
Kagome
Quince

Fire:
Lumina
Travis

Thunder:
Leon
Kazuko

Psychic:
Jessica
Maso

Light:
Muffy
Harry

Dark:
Nami
Nick

Ice:
Kiyoshi
Elyssa

If you have a character you want in this, tell me with a profile and you can be a sprite, or a character can help mine out, and can also just barely control the power you choose. just remember to put what element and PERSONALITY. I cant really play as your character if I dont know how they act. I've talked long enough. on with the story!! Oh, and if you didn't read this before, NO FLAMES! and no criticism... I'm doing this for FUN, not to show off my writing skill. If I wanted to do that, I'd put down a Naruto story I created that I worked hard on.

DISCLAIMER: I do NOT own Tokyo mew mew, or the original elements, but I DO own most of the characters that use them.

" Who.... Are you? What's wrong?! H-Huh? Is that...?"
The alarm clock went off, making 13-year-old Momoko Holsmen jump up. She sighed," Was it just a dream? No... I could have sworn that boy who was crying out was...!"
" Morning Momo-chan!!! You look perky today!" called Travis Hanser, as he pulled himself into her room from her window.
" Travis!! Why didn't you just use the door?" She sighed heavily, looking annoyed.
" Hm... Didn't think of that.." Travis said,putting a finger on his lips, looking confused.
"Seriously... I just woke up..." Momoko said, her yellow eyes looking really annoyed. She then said," Travis, go ask Katie for something to eat, I need to get dressed."
"Aw... Fine." He said, walking out of her room. She sighed, as she grabbed her normal clothes and slipped them on. She walked out, brushing her long dark tan hair.
She walked to the door,"Come on Travis..." She muttered bitterly, hating to wake up. He looked at her, a piece of toast in his mouth. He finished it quickly, then skipped after her.
" Its Saturday... Where are we going?" Travis asked.
" Just wait and see." Momoko said, giving him a sweet smile, as she sipped some coffee she had grabbed as she left. Travis watched her sip the coffee.
" Ugh... How can you like that stuff. its so strong." He said, looking grossed out.
" It's not as bad as you think, Travis." She said, as they arrived at Momoko's favorite place, the park.

Meanwhile~
"hm.... If I mix that with this, I should be able to start the project up again. This would be better if we were in Japan, Then we would have the real mews with us." Someone said, as they poured a substance into a machine.
There was a sudden explosion.
The person flinched, as they got pushed against the wall. A lot of black and white lights shot out. The person said," Hm? There were only supposed to have the white lights..." they sighed," I think I just made new enemies for them."

At the park~
Momoko sighed, as she lay lazily on the grass. Travis looked around, not seeming to be able to sit still. He said,"Ahh! I'm going to go get something to eat.. I'll bring back onigiri(Rice balls)." Momoko nodded.
Momoko closed her eyes. She lay for a few minutes, then opened her eyes to reveal a white light shooting toward her. Her eyes widened as it hit her, knocking her unconscious. Travis ran back," Momoko!" He kneeled by her," Wh-What happened? I should go get some ice or something! Maybe she hit her head again!" He ran off.
Momoko woke up a bit later. She looked around,"Hm? Travis? Where is he?" she cocked her head, Then just shrugged.
Travis came back," Momoko... You okay?" Momoko smiled and nodded.
"All I remember is a light.." She said, as she explained what happened.
Travis listened,"That sounds scary... Sorry... I wasn't there."
Momoko said," Stop blaming yourself," She looked away, pouting.
Travis smiled, and said,"Yeah. Sorry."
Momoko sighed," Nothing seems to be wrong with me anyway. I'm tired. Lets go home."
Travis nodded as they separated. Momoko smiled, walking to her house. She put her hand in her pocket and then felt something. she thought,"What the? I didn't put anything in here.." Her eyes widened to see a kirema anima. She said,"What is that?"
Momoko fell back, as it attacked her. She said,"What?!"
A voice called,"Baka(Idiot)! Just say anything that comes to mind!"
Momoko blinked then said," Mew mew Peach! Metamorphosis!" She transformed, then looked down to see herself in a orange tube top and skirt, with matching shoes and gloves. She also had fluffy cat ears and tail. She said,"What the..?! What is all this? And why is the skirt so short?! I-I'm gonna faint!" She shook herself then chanted," Peach ring!" An orange ring, like Ichigo's came to her.
Looking at it, then the kirema anima, she said," Ribbon Peach blush!" She destroyed it. Then began to panic,"What is this!? How do I get out of it!? Everyones gonna think I'm a freak!!!" She got hit over the head by something, and fainted.
A girl sighed, holding a frying pan. She said," If you didn't freak out, I wouldn't have done that." She shook her head sadly, and dragged her off.

A few hours later Momoko woke up in a place that looked like Cafe Mew Mew. She looked around,"Hm?"
The girl looked at her," You okay? Sorry for the scare back there. I just didn't expect to have someone melodramatic as the new Leader of the Mews."
"The... What?! Who are you?!" She growled.
The girl smiled,"I'm Jessica. Call me Lulu." She pulled her into a room, and showed her a presentation of the mews.
Momoko said," Cool... but I dont know.. I mean.. I can get killed." She looked away, looking indecisive.
Lulu said," If you don't you can get killed anyway, and everyone else n the earth will get killed." She looked down.
Momoko sighed, looking awkward. She sighed again, and muttered,"Okay, Okay! I'll do it,"
Lulu smiled,"Put this on."She gave her a box.
Momoko nodded, as Lulu showed her to the dressing room. Momoko came out a few minutes later, looking shocked. She said,"Woah! I-Its weird." It looked like the normal Mews cafe uniform, but had white gloves and boots and higher socks.She looked at herself,"Wow..."
Lulu said,"You'll be working here from now on as a waitress. I'll pay you 10 dollars an hour, and you can have free food."
Momoko said,"Okay. I need some more money I guess."

Night with Momoko~
Momoko laid on her bed quietly. She sighed lightly, as she pulled herself up to sit. It was quiet and she got up and walked to her desk. Water crashed onto her window, making it break. The water spilled in. Momoko said,"What!?" She jumped back, as the water surrounded her. She said,"Huh?!"
A boy watched quietly, and smirked. He muttered,"I found you."
Momoko flinched as she thought,"I... I can't breathe! Someone.... Help.... Me.." Her family all had different necklaces. Hers had a blue circle pendant on it. It began to glow and the water got forced aside. She said," What... Happened?" She put her hand on her necklace.
She fell back on her bed, coughing up water. She thought,'I almost died... That was scary. I wonder what stopped it though..."
The boy smirked, muttering," Hm.. I guess I'll have to go harder on her." He jumped away.
Momoko fell asleep, tired from a hard and busy day.

Thats the end of chapter one! Sorry If Its short, and/or bad. Who is the mysterious boy? What caused the water to stop attacking her? What other mews will there be?
All these questions will be answered in chapter two!

Bye bye for now! I hope you liked this and will comment. This will be on fanfiction soon.